inb4LEL SARCASM THIS SUCKS IM SO FUNNY

Oh, I love this story

Aw man , please continue ! its so good !

I luv this story!

But what about Tai's death? Maybe she could help him somehow, and become back to life!

But is this a Michi or a Mimato or what? Could you please answer that question in the other chapter! Thank you!

hey hey that was awsome please continue bye

Hey, I love the movie Casper, and this is way similar to that movie, isn't it? Anyways, the idea is cool but you need to work a whole lot on this plot.

FIrst, make Mimi research on Tai's death. Second, structurally, the fic is thick and confusing. Separate it in paragraphs everytime someone speaks, or everytime there is a new idea or similar.

Keep working on it, I like the idea, o a make chapters a lot longer.

Ireth.

i wonder how it looked like when taichi ate the sandwiches! *lol*

ooh i can really feel the embarrassment of the moment! how is mimi gonna get herself out of this one?

oh, and you didn't split up the text like you did in the earlier chapters... maybe you forgot it or something... i mean, i don't have trouble reading it but some people always complain about those kind of things... _;;

update soon!

First, try to work in present tense unless we are soppose to be reading a narration. Second, a soccer tip, there is no such thing as a three pointer in soccer. That's basketball.

I also have an idea; what if Tai isn't dead, what if his soul got expelled from his body but the body is alive but in a coma or something in the hospital. Dead or alive it should be pretty easy for Mimi to read what happened to Tai in old newspapers or the internet. Kids dieing on the soccer field would most likely be reported. What do you think?

Hey you updated! Great chappie update soon pleez!

Another great chappie!

yeah i think writing in past tense would be better as well as most people write that way!

also the star thing to the far right of the keyboard...on the number pad a star should be on there, second from right, top line lol, that might work instead of the shift-8 stars, and they're exactly the same as well!

can't wait for the next chappie!

I don't think the stars work no more, they used to, but they don't come through the uploading this any more, just tell the readers you're using like :: instaed of * now that's what i plan on doing I used :: to describe what i'm doing and stuff.

I really enjoyed this chapter, aww poor taichi being squished lols [err he can't really be squished but ya] I hope Taichi helps Mimi out, he would know of a soccer team, I think the It's sound better then It is, I;m not sure why I guess maybe I'm soo used to It's instead of It is and ya...

omaigosh, i ran across this story and read it, and so far i think its the cutest thing ever! please please update this!

. right when he is going to tell her...

Great job. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

This is a very intertaining story, keepup the good work.

WHY WHY did u stop it was getting good and u stop i hope u'll update this story soon cuz its real good