Hey so I reread your story again and I still love it. Please finish it. I don't care if you write just one other chapter to finish it as long as it's done.

I don't see at all how the Sorceress was being bossy to Mekanek. If anything he was being quite disrespectful. The only thing she said was not to tell Randor. Mekanek basically attacked her about the situation even though he knew very little about it. Like jumping down her throat about her possibly being out of commission, etc. Like, why would she be? Still I'm very glad she and Adam finally spoke!

Finish this story

I really hope that this is a story that you will pick up again, I love how you build the characters and evole them. This is also a rather "adult" take on the series, the whole mental aspect of it that is. I guess it is/was a cartoon aimed for kids, but still...

If you do continue this, I can't wait to see what you will do with EvilLyn's and TriClops' knowledge about the situation.

Please continue!

/Ithanny (Do not really have the energy to log in right now (haven't for the last... Three? years), not sure if I remember my password. ;-))

Eideann,
You have an amazing talent. Your stories are incredible. I really hope that someday soon you'll come back and finish them all.
I can understand how life can take all your time and energy. Hopefully your muse will come roaring back and your wonderful stories can be completed.
I for one can't wait for that day. I'll be keeping my fingers crossed.

What a terrible place to end. Oh wel, pretty good up to thst point. Shame you decided not to continue.

Love the story, just wish it was longer! I hope you come back to it.

I found the whole story so far very enlightening. This is the first time I thought about Adam's mental condition of being He-Man. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Love the story, I really hope you come back to it!

Hey there, just a friendly little nudge. I think your last author's note said you would post sooner than a 15 month gap? Can I poke you into posting a few more chapters? I'm really quite interested in knowing how this all gets resolved, especially with so many, including some of the villains, now aware of the secret.

Hi! I love your He-Man stories and would be extremely happy if you would update those one! It's so well written and I still have it faced after all this time. Please tell me your trying to continue it...even if there is some writers block hindering you, a note in the story telling us who love your work that this story is not abandoned would be a relief! Thank you so much for the wonderful He-Man stories you have written! Yours a my favorite by far!

Neko

I hope that some day you can finish this story. I really enjoy it.

Please update this! It's 2012! New beginnings or at the very least, old endings .Please?

I really like this fic. I love how you show how the stress of living a double-life has affected Adam after so much time. And I love how certain people are finally taking notice that not everything is how it seems. I can't wait to see what happens next. Is Adam going to be alright? How will they rescue him from Skeletor? And what is this foreshadowing of Randor's death if he learns the secret? Why would that kill him? Unless the reality of the Sorceress' vision is that he is already dying, perhaps injured in a fight, and Adam decides to come clean and admit the truth.

One other question. Is Dorgan an original character? I don't remember him from the original series or the new one but it has been a long time since I watched either so I could be mistaken.

To conclude this review, I really enjoyed this fic and hope you will update it as soon as you can.

Nice story. Why don't you update sooner?