I enjoyed reading your story very much, even if some characters are OOC and I didn't like the idea of Usagi having an egg inside her. I liked Usagi's growth as a character and her relationship with Piccolo. I'm glad Chibiusa was good and that Mamoru found redemption in the end.

The story line is kind of confusing, but all in all avery good read.

Hi!

I have always loved this story. It's so fun, and so out of left-field, and I genuinely adore the character development you show with everyone. I had never read a pairing like this before, but the way you did it worked perfectly. I really liked the part where Usagi came back to her own dimension; that alone was worth the price of admission. I also was surprised by the addition of the cast of Ranma, but the way you integrated them worked great. I really like the voice you give to the characters, both established and your own, and I like how everything works so well. You're a great and fun writer and you told a really awesome story. Thank you so much for writing this.

I realky wanted her with trunks

Omg rini was a brat and thet said sbe better than serena grrr

I think your story is very interesting and it has originality. Though I don't like the fact that you made Mamoru seem superficial and Usagi a whimp in the begining (she's not that weak), I still like the story. Especially the part when Vegeta becomes a SSJ (it's so touching) and the growing bond between Usagi and Piccolo. A SSJ's energy doesn't heal/revive others (they have the dragon balls for that), but it was a nice touch. And I'm sure that a saiyajin becomes a SSJ through anger, not grief...but well, grief can turn into anger, so that's ok. In the end I want to add that the senshi and Mamoru don't prefer Chibiusa over Usagi, that's just Usagi's childish way of seeing things. They definitely care a lot about her and value her strengths.
I'll send another review when I finish reading the story (it may take a while), but I wanted to review this chapter as well, since I like it. Thank you so much for the story!

great story

I first read this fanfic years ago. I loved it then and I still love it now.

cool epilogue i like its funny and sweet with ryoga and phoenix i like it and i want to read a bardock usagi fic would be fun to read. *cupcakes for you*

Thank you thank you thank you for writing that story thats jsut the story i wanted to read here
i love it its was amazing very interesting exciting sweet and romantic i just love it the couple is of course the best thats why i have read it i wanted to read a story with usagi and picolo as a couple but htere arent any and i was so happy as i found that yay the other couples are cute too and that damn bitch rays is dea yes thats what she gets for beeing so power hungry. *lots of cookies for that super work*
I would be happy to maybe read another one of that couple in the future _v

Oh this chapter was flippin' awesome. I love the twist with how Vegeta became a Super Saiyan.

Even after after almost ten years after it was completed, I still find myself going back to read this story. I'm not even into Sailor Moon or DBZ anymore! It's still a wonderful story.

awsome job keep up the excelent work with your stories

I can't believe I havn't already reviewed this.

I first found it on Lady Cosmos's fanfiction pages and must have read it several times. It's a brilliant story, well told, even if it does get a bit convoluted at times. One thing I would have liked was more diferentiation when the plot time skips forward, but that's a minor niggle.

I love how you made the transition of Usagi from cry-baby to badass convincing, though evil Rae and Mamoru felt a bit off. Involving Ranma shouldn't have worked, but did, and the Usagi/Picolo romamce was nicely done.

This was one of the inspirations for my own power-up fic, 'Training Tails', where Miles Prower (Sat AM version) cheering section and kidnap bait, gets dropped through a dimensional portal to Dragonball Earth and hooks up with Goku just as he's going to get training from Master Roshi... hilarity and power-ups ensue. And that isn't the only place he's going to visit... grin

I even give your link in my introductory notes, along with 'Shinji Warhammer 40K'.

Thank you for writing this.

Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP!