That story was AWESOME! The Halloween one actually had me creeped out for a moment . . . okay, more than a moment. :)You're gonna add another to it, right?

ha i read this one originally on your own website. Just gotta say i love it . Reno is so cute! You should definatley keep going with this one, and the halloween chapter rules!

teh suspense!

LMFAO! That was hilarious! Man, they are such bastards XD I really liked his chapter. You really built up the suspense well and then the humorous ending was just classic :P Definately worth the wait.

And Rufus is rather talented with scary sound effects

Keep up the awesomeness,

CT

PS: Why is the 14th floor really sealed off then? o.o

I really enjoyed reading this fic! But why is it that Tseng always comes out on top? It's kind of annoying. Either way, i loved the story, and can't wait to read more.

Reno is sexeh!

Squeaker

Flippin' awesome.

I almost pissed my pants because it was so good.

YES! Even when I'm obsessed with Harry Potter I gotta read your updates. Nice one. I thought it had been Tseng and Rude, but then it wasn't. But I hadn't thought of Rufus. Forgot about him. Nice work

This was definatly worth the wait! Hope you start writing some more stories soon!

Wow! This trully is the best chapter so far!

Wow. Just... wow.

Besides that Halloween is long overdue, this is an EXCELLENT fanfic. The humour, the characters, everything is perfect. My only complaint would be I wish you would update quicker, but I understand if writer's block attacks. Sometimes the cure doesn't exist...

This is the best Turk fanfic I've ever read. Tseng is so evil. Not to mention Rufus! I'd love a bit more romance, but then again, I'm a romantic daydreamer.

Update soon!

I luv it! Just read the whole thing a masterpiece! I luv both ur styles or writing (serious with a lil humor and just plain humor) just 1 thing; dont make Reno/Elena a couple! I don't mindem bein friends actually it's \pretty cool (as long as their either pranking or 1 ofem almosgt killin da other or punching eachother, ect) but dont makem a couple PLZ! continue and great story!

I found this series hugely enjoyable, and although the last chapter was much more serious it didn't seem too out of place at all. Although I possibly enjoyed the more humorous parts of the series a little more, I thought that the 10th chapter was a necessary development.

I think what I liked the most about your writing is that you captured their characters so perfectly, and made them so believeable (spelled wrong, i think, but anyway). Especialy Reno, since watching Advent Children he has become my favourite FF character. You've done well by expanding on his cocky, cynical personality, the depth of character study was very interesting (those mismatched Turks are a mysterious bunch), and you fit it in with the plot well.

Not sure whether it would be more appropriate to return to the humour of previous chapters or continue with more serious plotlines, but whichever you chose I'm sure I'll enjoy it just as much as the rest of the story.

This review is probably a lot of waffle, not sure if I'm particularly 'qualified' to comment on another person's writing, just wanted to let you know that I've loved reading this far. Keep it coming! Good luck for the future.

That was so many different kinds of unbelievably good that you couldn't even imagine it.

The humour is fantastic, but I do love the more dramatic side that you've taken a slant on. Looking forward to seeing another update sometime!

I loffed this chapter, but I think the funny stuff was better...

Hey, where's Mr. Foo-Foo?xD

i like how this story progressed so far. i hope you continue writing, this is a great story. to answer your question, i think having a littl humor and a little seriousness is the way to go, but dont forget to do some humorous chapters every now and then. once again, great story, and i hope you continue it.