Oh boy.

I would so like this to be continued- it's a wonderful premise- the Morgo- *cough* Melkor narration is very original. Nice sarcasm, Melkor. ;)

Hurin, your imprisonment makes Prometheus' being chained to the rock and having his liver ripped out every day seem not all that bad a thing, really. Ah well, even if this story is orphaned, it's a wonderful beginning. I'm going to search on some LOTR sites and see if you've posted someplace else, but even if I find nothing, your stories are vastly entertaining.

I seriously can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!

poor Hurin

tsk

Are you not continuing this? :(

Okay? That was... a parody. Strange but pretty nice. The Vala OOCness is funny.

KEEP WRITING!

THIS IS HILARIOUS xDD Melkor~ Oh Melkor~ I always did think Melkor sounded nicer than Morgoth. Not to mention my classmate had a brother called Melkor, but I'm pretty sure that wasn't how you spelt his name xD And yes, ignore everyone who says he was imprisoned in the Void, that was wayyyy after this 8D You know, if Melkor told /me/ the full account of his story, I really wouldn't mind being captured. As long as I didn't turn into a Maedhros. That's good xD

'First, he moved with an unusual sense of purpose, which might indicate that he could keep his mind on things for more than five minutes at a time. Second, he was not singing.'

VANYAR ARE SO LOLLLL xDD Oh Finrod, how he must have regretted ever being nice to Melkor DD

'and names that I'm convinced they made up on the spur of the moment.'

WHAT? HOW, MELKOR? How could you think that! As far as I know, the most names they had was 4...(yes, so maybe that was a lot, but at least I can remember it! 8DD) And yes, that was your love~ -eyes Maedhros- -is shot-

Yavanna's got "special" mushrooms? Oh no! The Vanyar trying to get Morgoth to sing in a singalong? Hahaha! Poor Hurin. I need to read The Silmarillion again. Finrod is Galadriel/Alatariel/Nerwen's brother, right?

Um... did you *really* publish this TWO YEARS AGO? Could you get you socks on, please?

I liked this fic! It was very funny. And I don't know what everyone is talking about. I thought in the Silmarillion it said that Melkor was imprisoned in Mandos for three ages. Then he was imprisoned in the Void after the War of the Wrath.

Uh. Wasn't Melkor supposed to have been imprisoned in the Void?

Ahem, nice story by the way, can't wait for more.

Sings: "I'm just a Vala whose intentions are good,

O Eru, please don't let me be misunderstood..."

This is great. It's funny how the most interesting characters are the ones who are the least perfect. I like Tolkien, but he never seemed to figure this out, or he would have spent more time on the sons of Finwe and less on Luthien and her Pretty Song Magic.

Ahh, this is amazing! It's like... the other side of the story! Wow, write more, please!

Melkor was imprisoned in the Void.

Just thought I'd tell you.