| Reviews for Breathing His Breath |
|---|
itsclarindatan chapter 1 . 10/16/2018 This is like their honeymoon already. Gosh, I love this. |
yo chapter 1 . 10/1/2015 amazing work! one of my best otps :D |
MrsBohemian chapter 1 . 8/3/2015 This is beyond perfect. I like how you portrait Akane; more often than not people fail to realize that she's actually quite a romantic girl if the mood is right. |
blalala chapter 1 . 8/24/2013 Wow, that was just . . . wow. Write more please :) |
rhapsody14 chapter 1 . 9/24/2011 this story is really beatiful |
M.M.H chapter 1 . 2/23/2011 Great description! Maybe you should write something like this in Ranma's point of view. |
spiralnoteboooks chapter 1 . 6/29/2010 Very good job! Your writing style is unique and strong. This one-shot was very tender, and beautifully written. I hope that you keep on writing fanfictions, for this one was amazing! |
Taechunsa chapter 1 . 4/29/2010 That was a very nicely done story. The portrayal of the emotions and feelings was excellently portrayed. Good work. |
kph2pt0yahoo.com chapter 1 . 4/21/2009 Wow, so lovely _ I'm starved for good Ranma/Akane fanfic, thank you for this! |
Half-elf chapter 1 . 3/14/2008 I really enjoyed the abstract feeling of this and the rhythm is wonderful. Very nicely done. |
trustwrites chapter 1 . 10/19/2007 Fantastic, poetic, everything that one-shots usually aren't. Very nicely done. I enjoyed it immensely. |
Shandrial chapter 1 . 2/18/2006 This is a nice, different take on Akane. People generally make her a bit too hotheaded. Its nice to see the gentler side. And I always love stories were we get to peak into her mind and see she really does love Ranma. Excellent and well written. |
Jenna chapter 1 . 11/11/2005 Beautiful! Great work! |
Concetta chapter 1 . 9/1/2005 Holy . . . crap . . . That was so beautiful and poetic! It's going under favorites! . . . Wow. Ciao! |
Priestess Kohana chapter 1 . 8/6/2005 Wow...that was really beautiful. Fantastic job! ~Kohana |