Luna’s concerned for Severus! :)

I like Turtle’s name!

I’m glad that Luna has a way to escape all of them!

Everybody seems to be focused on Luna, even though they probably know Harry and Hermione better. Then again, Luna does live in the same area as the Weasleys, so maybe they got to know each other when they were younger?

Luna was raised in the magical world. Why would she compare an experience to “old movies?” It doesn’t make sense, I think :)

(And it’s spelled “Gryffindor,” not “Griffindor.”)

A nice, sensitive, friendly Ron? Nice! And I liked what Luna said about not wanting to be compared to Hermione. She’s her own person :)

Even with what she’s going through, it was still really unlike Luna to speak like that to Severus... and she didn’t even apologize?

Looks like Severus is on Luna’s side! :)

(Also, “alot” should be “a lot.”)

Hey! I've read through what you have so far and I love it! Please, please, please update soon!

Thanks!

Please continue this. I have dedicated my entire afternoon to reading this and I loooooove it!

Interesting portrayal!

I liked the story, especially the believable characters and end. Not the usual "all is good" but mistrust towards Snape even now and Luna pressed to chose between Love and School. Very nice story.

You made some reference to supporting gay/lesbians etc. Yet in your description of Luna(at times) you made a mockery of those who have mental problems. I did not see a rider or apology in regards to this. Do for one what you have done for the other-people with mental problems have feelings too

Aweee I'm happy for Severus. It took a while for the story to actually progress, but it seemed to move at a realistic pace. I for one enjoyed it. (:

keep up the good work,

A Happy American Nose Picker

ps. i haven't picked my nose since i was five so aha! :p

Awwww it was lovely! :) and so deep