Aw. This is...really really great!

(There were one or two words in it that made me pause for a moment, but those were quickly forgotten in the rest of the amazingosity of it all.)

Yay! :)

-Kat

thatz it? well newayz, very good. ur a great writer...way better than me...i suck. :)

Aftermath! Please, I've read this story like a hundred times, and I'd really like to see what happens after they wake up! Please, Please, Please! I'll review like a million times for it!

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Sincerely

AlannaBanana

i had first read your other story (snow) and i knew you were a good author and this would be an interesting story, so i listened to songbird. really great song. suits the mood in this story properly, and you're right. without listening to the song, readers wouldnt be able to fully appreciate and get the effect of the story. heh. now im a fan of the song and this story.

i had first read your other story (snow) and i knew you were a good author and this would be an interesting story, so i listened to songbird. really great song. suits the mood in this story properly, and you're right. without listening to the song, readers wouldnt be able to fully appreciate and get the effect of the story. heh. now im a fan of the song and this story.

Wow, this was amazing, I can’t believe I hadn’t stumbled upon your stuff before. You beautifully capture all the passion and love between them. From comforting, to the tension, to the kissing, it was awesome. I applaud you! Have you ever considered writing as a profession?

Whoa, woman, you are a brave soul! Finally took a break and checked this out and it was worth it! I loved how all that other "activity" happened before their actual first kiss giving it an even higher level of emotion. Impressive indeed.

OMG! That wuz such a good story the making our and everything thing it made me fell like i was there! CONTINUE! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

very cute. _ i enjoyed it very much. i hate it when people don't review, so i have reviewed. you rock. ;; my english is awful, i know. sorry. but you are still awesome!

Wow, was this ever good. After seeing the RFR finale I ahve been long ging for more and this story helped my need. I have read the other stories about intimacy between thr characters and they really didn't make sense and made it feel unnatural. The language you sue is very good, not complex and understandable, I got the image in my head, which was quite scary but your writing is very good. I hope to read more from you. Thanks for writing this.

This is really amazing...

Pure Fluff in the end. I'm real big on the Ray/Lily but this was one story I read that I liked based on Travis/Lily. Keep up the good work.

Very good. You portray emotion very well. I felt as if i was in the room with them both witnessing them fall in love. I like also how they didnt "go all the way" because it adds to the fact and also emphasizes his love for her. Keep up the good work,
Silver Pheonix

i love it, travis and lily are my favorite couple.
Please write more :)

yay for T/L smut! :D I was thinking of writing one too, but I don't think my writing is really up to par... XD
however, I love your writing, because I could completely imagine this as I was reading. (not a lot of fics do that to me) hopefully this will happen on the show... lol. can't wait to read more T/L or RFR fics from you.