it took me several days but ive finally finished... I found this story and quickly grew to love it. i was enthralled by your perceptions of the characters,intrigued by your muses,watched the budding love between the couples and even occasionaly filled my name in instead of jess...(bad me) I LOVE this story and even though a few things were out there (i dont think Raist 3 would fall for anyone who didnt give him personal gain...)I am interested in your muses because i do something similar...but i dont care what ANY of them say you NEED to give this another chapter i will be heart broken if you do not... I share your love of long mail/posts and your bad spelling (so please excuse this long eligibe post) I even enjoyed the humor you showed throughout the story and in responding to your reviews... tho im kinda a noob to fanfiction i spend alot of time on quizzilla and other similar sites and your simply my new favorite author and im looking forward to trying your other stories ( though it may take me a bit to acctually review since i dont usually comment on old posts) This story is WONDERFUL thank you for writing it youve truely made my week

p.s. Im sorry if anything ive said is taken offensively...it is ALL complementary...Youve given me my mounthly dose of RAISTLIN3 I apperciate it

I liked your fic, that was nice. :)

I loved it, and I think that this is by far one of the best fanfics I've ever had the privilige of reading. I didn't like the fact that yo9u repeated yourself in this chapter, but other than that I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Carry on with the good work.

I enjoyed this very much, I don't know all that much about Dragonlance yet but I still enjoyed this muchly. You are an excellent writer.

They tried to give an elf a rare steak? Hehe . . . the fools. And I love Maeg's fire-trick. Wish I had that. Stupid kids throw rocks at you on your bike - WHOOSH!

. . . near-death experiences seem to bring out the better side of people, don't they? Or at least the more reckless side. and gangsta music . . . ouch. Poor Dally, I feel your pain . . . school dances with the music turned all the way up . . .

You got Raistlin's mental voice correct, I dare say. Lovely vocabulary. Nice imagery. Have you ever seen CHILDREN OF THE DAMNED? It's a movie from the 60s where all the evil kids have gold-glowing eyes. And Maeg's musings are beautiful: 'if the voice of the heart changed as a person grew, or if the heart always knew what a person was to become.'

Ooh, walking in the garden; that's the stuff that romance is made of. Kissing Maeg among the dark; that is definately Dalamar's style. I wonder what Raistlin would have said.

. . . Dalamar dancing the YMCA? Better yet - Raistlin dancing the YMCA! . . . and all those others! Oh, that is funny! Slightly disturbing (Raistlin dancing, oh my) but funny.

. . . THE MUSIC OF THE NIGHT! OMG, I LOVE that song!

And now my criticism: (this is nitpicking)

You spelled 'Maria' like 'Mara' at one point.

"Takhisis' " should be "Takhisis's" because it is not plural.

. . . that's all so far. Lovely chapter, brilliant imagery. "The MUSIC OF THE NIGHT." was the perfect song. The story flows smoothly, although you may want to fill out the spaces inbetween the action more, so the reader can appreciate what has just happened more fully. I look forward to reading more of this. _. Bye, Raab.

I just recently started reading this story, and I am hooked! I've never been to a school hosted dance, but that is just how I pictured it to be...raging chaos, people walking around like zombies, evil goddess trying to be control freaks...anyway, I know this is going to sound weird but I am really confused...are you a guy or a chick? and what is a Mary-Sue?

yay! I have a chapter dedicated to me! *is happy* great chapter! I loved the YMCA part! I can actually imagine the looks on the mages' faces when they started dancing. btw, you seem to have a paragraph in there twice. Don't know if that's intentional, jut pointing it out.

~Jade

I just started reading your story and I must say it went a different direction than I thought. I'd invisioned Raistlin setting himself up politically with the US or China and becoming ruler through magiccal means. Can you imagine a line of black and red robes facing off against a modern army, scary!

I also believe Raistlin would have killed all of those children minutes after they began talking to him. That said I like the story, it can get a little too bubblegum pop for my tastes but it is well written. You are now on my author alert list, I will review again when I get to the newest chapter.

I wish I could say this was the best story I've ever read, but your Daughter of Prophecy story takes that gold medal!

Having never been one for Suefics,

or proms,

or interterrestrial meetings...

I can't exactly relate to your story.

But.

Good job, and who's your beta? He does a REALLY good job!

;)

-JBRam & Valgoruth

Yes! That's prom! OMG...guess it's the same everywhere. I'm just impressed there was something other than "gangsta music" playing at any time.

Awesome job as always; my favorite part of this story is definitely the social commentaryish stuff...how silly some of the things we Earthlings do is to the Krynnish people, etc.

I'll be posting in early July again...see, my new computer didn't come with a decent word processor, and NeoOffice for Intel-based Macs isn't available for free until July 1...gr...

YAY! You updated! Nice long chapter too. And your description of prom is so charitable. I think Dalamar's descrption of the dance floor was very accurate. Good chapter, and please update again soon!

This fic is good... update please?

Update soon? Please don't let this become one of the many good stories left unfinished.

Please update! (puppy eyes with a tear)

I am dying to read the next chapter!

Promise - will review every bit nicely!

People, just review and ask for updates - we will get one :) !

Hey, Dally... interesting story. I didn't expect Sues from y- wait a second... What's that? MAJOR TYPOS? Come on, people! If you're gonna review a story, at least have the respect to learn how to type! I mean, use the Backspace button!

Oh, yeah, great story. Keep up the good work!