I hate Barbra

Good story.

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Hi there!
I stumbled across you story while looking for new Fics to read as I haven't read TT in a while, and I must agree with a previous reviewer...this wasn't half bad.

I did however found various inconsistencies throughout the story like the characterization for one. Robin and Nightwing being the most OOC at times.

Also, there were parts that seemed incomplete, like you didn't quite follow through with the ideas that you had for the plot.
For example the scene with Robin and Nightwing showing off their Cyborgs and challenging each other that night...which the actual challenge wasn't shown after they returned from the Bagel Bungalow and was never mentioned again (which sucks cause that would've been hilarious, knowing Robin and his future self being so competitive, that would have gone baldly for both Cyborgs!)

But anyway...that aside I enjoyed reading this, the writing was nice and did really improve as the story progressed. It was a really interesting plot, having the team from the future visit their teenage selves.

All in all a nice read and you did a great job.
Hope to read more from you in the future!

Greetings,
ThElusiveShadow
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It's a good story but a little tough for me to like because if Nightwing hooks Robin & Starfire up, he'll get Starfire in the future. Also, Starfire's speech does not include contractions.

I like the whole Robin against his future self fiasco, but yeah, the whole "where exactly is Star?" thing isn't exactly right, but then again, it doesn't really need to be in order to get the whole Robin and Nightwing thing down without complicating things even further. Okay, I don't know how many chapters ago did this exactly start and I'm a bit lazy to check (guilty) but what sorta bothered me was the timing. When it went from, like, 2:30 to like 2:36 or something when it probably should've been longer, you know? Just pointing that out. And also, yeah, some characters really didn't seem like themselves at times. But still, all in all, the story wasn't bad, I kinda liked it.

Ooh, a story from 2008 :) I'm liking this story so far but whoa, I have no respect for Nightwing. It's understandable wanting to spend time and getting to share things with her that he missed his chance to, but he's telling her things that should be up to Robin to tell her when he's ready. Coming from the future, he should be acting as mentor to Robin, but instead he made it his mission to seduce a teenage Starfire, and that's more immature and pathetic than anything teenage Robin is doing. Nightwing is not only a grown man, he's from a different time and place and this nullifies any chance he could have with Star; whatever he does to try to win her over is practically senseless. He should be the bigger man and stop ticking off Robin and chasing Star. Robin is not going to be pleased with Nightwing about the kidnapping.

As a way to pass the time, this wasn't half bad. The writing got better as the story progressed, possibly due to the long time it took to complete?

I thought the characters weren't themselves at some times, and there were a few anomalies that confused me. Starfire doesn't understand the "human" way that people kill each other, but she understands the complexity of jealousy when she uses Nightwing as her date? And why would she bother trying to make Robin jealous, anyway, if she is ignorant of his feelings towards her?

Also, I doubt Robin is the sort to use Kitten just to get to Starfire.

I think it was totally believable how he reacted upon the realization that Nightwing had lost her, and their interactions with each other during the rescue were spot on, so kudos there.

Thanks for sharing, regardless.

~AkizukiSakura

I liked the story not the epilogue.

really loved your fic! i have ti say i was hoping for a more conclusive ending.. so, about that sequel.. did you get around to write it? :D

like it so far... ii'm just wondering why there isn't a "future starfire... i mean shouldn't that have been resolved when she went back? did she die in the meantime or smth? anyway. i'll probably find out from the fic later on.. just wanted to let you know i'm loving your fic :)

wow, this is an amazing story! I love how Robin is jelous of himself. It's wonderful! I can't wait to read more!

OH GOSH! ONE OF THE BEST STORIES EVER WRITTEN! Too bad no future star had arrived in Nightwings time But I totally love this fic, and am going to totally LOVE a sequel!

interesting, very interesting!

Dude, I love it! Robin hates himself! I love how you used a past episode. Great story!