A great poem fic. Very well written.

leslie! i enjoyed this poem very much; it had a slow and calm flow to it as you would expect from a poem of this sort of description, and yet, you wouldn't. it works very well in a juxtaposition against the adventidious nature of peter himself.

very nice, i bet you have no idea what i'm talking about, but you did it! :D

english sucks hard! XD

-VT

w00t! This is so good. Ha! I be in the writing lab and you be sittin a seat away from me! W00t moo!

Now...the ACTUAL review. This is a really great poem. I love poetry when its not angry and gothy... ::sigh:: This makes me happy because it is neither angry nor gothy and its amazing!

You know, this wasn't bad! It had a gentle flow to it, like I could just sit back and smile as I read it. I agree with what you have to say...though the penultimate line was a bit of nonsense, in my opinion. I'm assuming that was intentional, but it kind of threw me off, as the rest of the poem made so much sense.

Right on! And write on!

So true.