That was pretty! *ogles fic* I blinked at the smut-beginning, but it was so very nice~ It was a great scene, y'know? With the teasing, and the L/Lness of it all, and then the usual Luke-and-Lorelai-have-a-moment, only this time they act upon it- thank God. Yeah, I definitely like that fic. :D

Hey that was Great! Good Job! :] Keep righting for sure. Loved it! Oh just lettin you know the episode is called Love, Daisies, and Troubadours I'm pretty sure! But sorry if I'm wrong just trying to help. Sincerely, ljvolleyball11

Well, I finally made it to the first fic. This story was awesome. Every part of it was. I've now read and reviewed all you have. I'm sorry I didn't find your work earlier, but I have thoroughly enjoyed getting to know a little of your personality through your fics. The voices that you gave to Luke and Lorelai as well as all of author's notes were a pleasure to read.

I think last March was the last fic you wrote, but hopefully you'll continue to write. The new season's material gives me extra desire to write b/c it sucks so very much, but if you're one of the ones who need positivity on the show to produce a good fic, just read some of the ones around here b/c some of them are very inspiring. Anyway, I won't bother you anymore. I know you're about sick of my reviews by now, but I, now, try to review everything I read out of respect for the author (no matter how old it is). I've enjoyed reviewing for you, and I look forward to your next fic.

congratulations. your first fanfiction is quite excellent ) i really enjoyed this one...so yeah...good job. hehe...bye!

update please

Write the epilogue please!

Great story!

Hey ya!

I just read your story. and I think its great!

Maybe you should write about their after thougths and what's goging to happan next.

But your story was really great! I like it very much!

See ya!

Brooklyn

thank you.:)

hey! i love all ur storys! theres not many just LL storys out there! keep it up! and yea continue this one!

Please write an epilogue. I just read this story, and I love a lot. It would be so awesome if you wrote a sex scene.

Great Story. Very Luke and Lorelai. I applaud you. Keep writing. You have a talent for this.

HEY!, that was just Great, I mean it top notch,

I like the part where Rachel never existed, (if only the same could be said of Nicole and Max, and Jason, and Christopher... oh wait we need Christopher, to have Rory's DNA mixed up right... hm, he can be her sperm doner but that's IT, I tell ya)

BTW I love your work,(here's the stroke your ego part,... I know ,I know DIRTY!) the first thing I ever read of yours was ORIGINAL SIN (Shameless Plug) Everyone on this web site should go READ ORIGINAL SIN (NOT-SO SUBLIMINAL MESSAGE)

you know THE GLASS IS HALF NAKED is GREAT TOO (Luke for President, ... you see what I'm doing here right , hehehehe, I'm sneaky that way)

come on people don't make us send The PTB after you

(EVIL LAUGH: )

Their OMNISCIENT

(there cool that way!)

bye for now! keep up the good work and I hope ya write more soon, (I've read ORIGINAL SIN like 20 times... and its still FUNNY, it's my fav)

hee hee

oilsp!

(and my fellow readers: admit it! you're curious now, aren't ya; GO ahead guilty pleasure awaits in ORIGINAL SIN)

ps. do you think I wrote enough

pps this seems to be what i do, i don't wire FAn fiction i just review it... maybe one day i'll get up the nerve to write and have youall critic me.

ps did sing your praises enough ... oh wait All hail Sarah!

Hello, I've read over your stories listed here and think you have a lot of potential. If you are interested in becoming an amatuer author for a new online ebook company please contact me at .

I read your story the glass is always half naked two days ago and loved it so much i just had to go back and read all of your other fics. and i have loved them all! This one was exceptionaly good and i would like to see and epilogue. Please update soon.