great story! can't wait to see more lucius and harry action! but i won't forget hoping draco makes it out of this ok!(maybe more creature blood will rise to the surface for draco)

Would have loved to read the ending of this story!

having nalian reveal his ability is rather convenient to the plot i suppose but at the rate things are going everyone is going to discover nalian's secrets. for somebody supposedly raised at court he is not all that cautious, leaking sensitive information everywhere. since it seems he knows that he can speak to snakes surely he should have come across the stigma attached to it when researching his ability?

well that was pretty careless of nalian. but then again he didn't know what an insufferably nosy person snape is. i honestly don't understand why he would dislike nalian when he looks nothing like a potter. surely even the surly git wouldn't be that bigoted? even if he has good instincts, nalian is still a 17 year old boy who never even offended him in anyway unlike canon harry so the hate is rather unwarranted.

I've enjoyed your story. I hope that you will choose to continue writing it.

I have enjoyed this very much. I hope you find time to finish it someday as I would love to read the ending:)

this was excellent story so far looking forward, to more so please update soon

Pretty good story so far really want to know what is going to come so please update soon.

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Love it!:D

Please update! Pretty please!
I really LOVE this story, and I*m so looking forward to read more ;)
I hope you have a nice day :)

Love your story:)

gah! can't wait to read more; the tension is building! can't wait to read what will happen next :)

Lucius Malfoy is Like 40 years older than harry ! how does it work

Great chapter, love this story and can't wait to read more, please update