Why am I reading this now?
Good story, not of my taste but really good one

I read this because I saw the beautiful concept art as the picture for the trope page for dark Fic. The caption they added was an insult to your writing. It said "Ron stoppable trying to walk off his double serving of eye scream" That is not even funny, nor does it properly sum up the beautiful peace of work that paragon is. This should be it's own story with no ties to Kim possible. I went to see this purely because of the concept art. I found it an amazing piece of art. If i can find the paragon comic, I will read it. This story just has so much for me to love. Ron does something morally ambiguous without being made the bad guy, causing people to actually question what would be the proper thing to do in his place. The story properly detaches itself from actual Kim possible, something that it would have to do to stay scary. All in all, this story deserves to be the image for the dark fan fiction trope page.

I loved this.

I liked and Understood it but to be sincere that whole thing of Josh making Ron see you know what *Spoilers* Very Farfecthed hell he killed Monique just cause of the insanity all though the Ending was quite fitting the Beginning was very Unclear i at first thought he was some sort of demon but he's just a sick person with a deal with the devil So what can i say I like it but it's pretty exaggerated

Wow...this has to be the best fanfic I've ever read. I love the dark atmosphere you've created. I give this story not one, but two thumbs up!

The question that i have in this 1st chapter is;
if Ron is capable to tell Kim how Josh Mankey is playing with her feelings and say some lies or Kim can't figured out what's going to happen?

Well, I now feel like screaming my lungs out for the rest of eternity and wander around in a daze of what I'd just read...but that was undeniably amazing. There are no words to accurately describe this horrific masterpiece. It made me want to break something, made me want to just lay down and cry forever, but I can't ignore the fact that it was a magnificent story in its own light. You my dear author, have not only made me feel emotions I can not begin to describe, but you have completely changed me for the rest of my life. This is more than skill or talent, what you have is the greatest gift in writing I have ever laid eyes upon. You are in your element here. Now, I must now go off and try to stabilize the emotional wreck within me. Have a nice life. Bye.

My first dose of reading dark fanfiction based on children's shows (not counting the stuff I've read from creepypasta) and ooh that was seriously messed up. After reading this fic, I don't think I'll ever look at Kim Possible the same way again lol. By the way, this whole plot would make an excellent horror film.

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...*looks at the update date* Whoa, this was ten years ago?! Serious? Um...Dunno if you'd even consider reading reviews after such a long time but anyways, this fic was suitably creepy and I can't say it gave me much...urm happiness, but I imagine there isn't really any happiness to be had after such a series of dark and twisted events XD I think you are right, though, that there's no way KP could have just gone on and lived a happy and full life with Ron in Josh's body.

Btw, I'm not a major fan of Kim Possible (it's just one of those shows you watch when nothing else is one, for me) and this was the first KP fanfic that I read (got here from Tv Tropes' page for Dark Fic - the page image of Ron was AWESOME, btw!) but I am seriously considering reading some more, and maybe they will all be dark fics xD So, kudos, my friend!

Grammar-wise...Um...Nothing to say on that, but spellings could have done with a once-over here and there and some chapters (no, one chapter especially, I can't remember which) the structure was really confusing, like scenes just crashed into each other because there was no gap in-between, but I think you mentioned that was because of the site and formatting issues.

All in all, rather dark and angsty, which I am totally not averse to :D It has been...interesting reading this. Thank you for the story and best of luck for any and all future projects (if you are undertaking any at present)!

Shiki

That was utterly creepy. (The suicide at the end is too much. I am not Mr. Emotional, and I don't cry, but this tensed me up with quite the bitter ending...)

(sing-song) what the fuuuuuuuuuu-uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu-uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck.

OH MY GOD

Wow. I read this all in one sitting... It was just so... Amazing. Bravo.

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I just finished reading this story. I read it in one sitting, in the wee hours of the morning (it's almost 4am now). Wow, that was quite a ride! I'm glad I had my pillow handy for hugging purposes. I really don't know if I have adequate words to express how amazing this story is...

The entire time I was trying to predict what would happen, and what was really going on. In most stores I have become very good at that. I did know from the beginning what was really in the forbidden room, and I had complete faith in Ron. But your twists really threw me... I nearly strangled my laptop screen when Ron was killing Kim's family ("BUT RON IS NOT EVIL, NOOOOO!") and you definitely did not give me the ending that I was expecting. And I love it when an author delivers the unexpected and does it well! This is the best horror/tragedy fanfic I have ever read. Now if you'll excuse me, I need to go watch a happy Kim Possible episode on YouTube to reset my brain. :)

Write on - Celadon Catamount