Aww Jack.. he does need his freedom :'( It's what makes him Jack.. thankyou :) I love little insights to his thoughts :D Thankyou xx

Oh WOW! This is breathtakingly fantastically wonderful. A brilliant insight into Jack at this point in the movie. WOW.

good story! really liked it. fits in very well w/ your story. can't wait till you continue with that one as well.

POTC ah, nicely depressing, and angsty! Sounds like part of a larger story... maybe I should go check out your author page and take a look at whats there... maybe I will... or could this be a prologue? hm. great writing anyhow!