Reviews for No Heavier Burden
estiew2002 chapter 13 . 6/19/2007
What an amazing, amzing story! I read all 13 chapters in one breath. It is so much better than what we saw in the actual show. an the way you put everyone's feelings into words, I could almost see them. thank you. You have a real talent and I hope you continue writing.
Catherine chapter 13 . 8/2/2004
Absolutely the best story that you have written yet, that is what was missing from the actual show, the absulute anger and then the absolute forgiveness, the show only tapped into that and I was left wanting some more closure and now I have it with your wonderful fanfic. Thanks.
TheRealMcCoy chapter 12 . 2/4/2004
"Jed, don't you dare do this. I know you have to win, but this is not the way. You son of a bitch, I am telling you that I will fight you every step to Hell."
Love it! And love the suspense!
TheRealMcCoy chapter 11 . 2/4/2004
Really really good. I LOVE inner conflict and serious plot and this has both!
TheRealMcCoy chapter 10 . 2/4/2004
GO CJ! I loved that she did what she felt was right and didn't care about the consequences!
TheRealMcCoy chapter 9 . 2/4/2004
I loved the last two lines. Oh geez, I really feel so sorry for all of them having to endure this. Well done!
TheRealMcCoy chapter 5 . 2/4/2004
Oh! Poor Leo! I can see where they all lay blame. Really am liking this!
TheRealMcCoy chapter 3 . 2/4/2004
I really love the way you went with this story. The way that the chapters are assigned to various characters and I really like the concept of dealing with how they all dealt with this because with the time constraints and no AAron Sorkin, it wasn't as covered as when the shooting at Rosslyn. I really am looking forward to reading more.
I am normally a big Josh/Donna fan, but I like this take on the situation. Keep it up!
Helna chapter 13 . 1/31/2004
Glad to see they made up. (Smiles)
Helna chapter 12 . 1/19/2004
Oh God! You so had me going there. I thought he was gone!
daffycat7 chapter 11 . 1/19/2004
Really fine story writen in a suspensful and caring manner. Can't wait to read the next episode. You can't leave us hanging like this!
Thanks again for all your good writing.
BlackEyedGirl chapter 10 . 1/17/2004
Just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying this. I like how you're looking at everyone's perspective while still focusing on the central relationship. And you have them all down so well! Keep posting...
Helna chapter 10 . 1/16/2004
Wow, this story is so good. And God the tension in this story is just killing me.
Helna chapter 7 . 1/11/2004
Yeah! He's up! Please elt him be ok!
DianeB chapter 6 . 1/10/2004
I don't know how you get so far into these character's heads - and so excellently - but you sure do. I can't wait for the rest of this story.
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