I can totally picture it

I agree with you on your belief that the other Slytherins from Sev's time at Hogwarts aren't used nearly enough. Keep up the good work and I want to see more of this story.

I enjoied this fic a lot! I found it a long while ago and have never really commented before, but this isn't the first time I've come back to read it :)

bravo! :)

Absolutely lovely. Never thought of so many things to do to a chocolate frog before.

Yeh I like the story and I totally agree with the authors note. Hope you write more soon luv Gothic Kat

i luv this fic! i absolutely love the characterizations and how snape is poor. That's a very very interesting idea in general. this was great. keep it up, ec

You mention that you're suprised that more writers haven't written about Bellatrix and Severus' friendship. To which I answer, if everyone who wrote about them wrote a story like this, it would be one of the favourite fanfic topics out there. Great job!

This was really good! I like your vision of Knockturn and Severus's general upbringing. You have a talent for bringing out the characters who are otherwise unmentioned. There were a few small spelling and grammar mistakes that just want another read-through to catch, but I very much liked this.

beautiful... good crazy bellatrix and I'm going through a poor Snape phase.

hey there
cool story... write more... please email me wen you update...
midnight solitaire

AWESOME! I'm not a huge Slytherin fan but this story was very cool! Keep up the good work! From: The evil Duck

hey! i love how you write this and i love, and i mean LOVE, they way you bring out the awkwardness that comes with being that age. good job! keep it up as well as the awkward 12-year-olds.