I really tried to read this story, and I forced myself to do so along these ten chapters because the good reviews, but it isn't well written, characters are unteneable and overall the plot is bad developed and pretty much non-existent. I got it, you wanted to do something really 'angsty', but that doesn't mean you can add drama just for the sake of it. You didn't even build a believable scenario to put the numerous (too many in fact) controversial situations into: just threw them in a series that, by the way, has not coherence at all. The personalities of the characters are inconsistent, irrational and unbearable, and empathize with them is almost impossible; the grammar is bad and sometimes you repeat the same ideas with slightly changed phrases, which makes everything even more boring (and yes, the story is boring. To be more accurate: it makes itself anodyne because its constant unnecesary dramatic effects). There's nothing worse in a drama than being repetitive and not causing any impact in the reader because the unrealistic nature of the plot, and that's what you just did. So I quit here.

Still a good fanfiction.

U made me fear of the word 's so sad story, but it was great one too. I wanna tell u an advic make the ending of the story be a happy ending not sad one it almost made me cry or cry whatever it was so nice story I like it really

What? Suoh dies? OMG! How in the world I can offer to do the sequel if Suoh dies? But then again... Hmmm... I can do something about it though... that is if you'll agree that I'll do the sequel.

I just don't understand as to why Akira gots mad at Suoh when what the blue haired boy did was the same as was Nokoru did earlier.

And Suoh's right, he's only doing what Nokoru wanted... SO why the hell he get all the blame? I don't understand the characters justification here. They get mad at Suoh because he's leaving Nokoru, but when Nokoru had purposely hurt Nokoru no one blames the blonde boy? Tsk.

I hope you'll reply, in regards with the sequel asap. I mean, while I'm still on fire on writing the sequel, cause once I cool off. It would be hard for me to write it.

What? he doesn't want suoh to know because he doesnt want him to be sad? Is he stupid? He already hurt him so much, that hurting him more is already impossible. what kind of logic was that?

Sides, why in the world all the sympathy should go with Nokoru? Not that I hate him, in fact he's my favorite character. But what the... cause in reality, he's the one do the hurting the most, and should be the one who's apologizing. Cause Suoh had ask him so many times to forgive him, and that its easy for Suoh to ask for an apology. Wah! I think I don't mind him dying here, he's one big stupid boy.

What a baka... I'm getting piss off really! REALLY! Suoh, go die, then maybe when your dead your stupid master will finally say he loves you.

I wanted to enter your story, and kick nokoru hard! What's with him? Gah! and his making out with the guy he doesn't love, and he's pushing the one he loves. Is he a retard?

Sorry for my ranting but nokoru's getting on my nerve.

I always thought that Nokoru's the most sensitive and the smartest of the three... how come he acts like a moron here?

Amazing. You did very well author. Thanks for doing this fanfiction

Let me tell you something do you know how many ccd good fics are?

very few and yours is very (very) good... and because it's a good story no matter how long you take to finish it fans will always wait because your fic gives great feelings to the reader it's so enjoyable to read I don't even know how many times I read this fic but ... keep going and continue it.

Really, with no doubt, it is amazing!

You're a briliant writer! I thinking why you haven't write the next chapter...(:P)

Hikzz, don't let Nokoru or Suoh die.. They are really the best couple...

Well, i can't wait anymore.. Just write the rest!

Please update!

wow. a cliffhanger...sigh. the angst is ...whew. nontheless, this is definitely one of the best CCD fics Ive ever read. I love it. I even cried in some chapters. I want to strangle them all for being so stubborn and so damn righteous...ugh...and I hate Nagisa. I always will. She is so "sweet and kind" it's sickening! And she's...UGH!... Anyway,I think the angst is getting to my head. Just update soon ok? _V

sorry to review you twice. i can't help it! i really love this chapter very much. especially at the time suoh and nokoru said this:

"do you still remember, we've known each other by chance, became friends by choices, still friends by decision, and when we say friends 4eva, that's definitely a lifetime promises."

OMG! i love it! very very very love it! i write the quote at my chat book with my best friends. i wanna share this feeling to them coz i really mean it what you've said. i'm very grateful truly grateful to have them beside me always and your sentences said it all! AMAZING! i love that quote! anyway... (ehem... turning back normal again.) continue soon okay?

yeah... it's been so long and sorry... actually i've forgotten the first until the last chapters (i only remember a bit). but i will re-read it again _ thx for continuing this story anyway... _ i love it very much _ write soon okay? and good luck with your website. i hope it goes well and great.