only a fool wants to be jedi.
jedi are nothing but weak willed sheep.
also this is boring a.f. so far.

You should burn just for summary alone.

I didn't read much I skipped a head to see where/if it was complete. BUT harry/ginny pairing? Nah can't read this

I started reading this the first time awhile ago but never finished it. Now I intend to finish what was posted though I now I'll wish it was completed long before then. So if you, the author, are reading this I'm sad you never did. If it was because of flame abuse, then you should've ignored the idiots and just continued. It's simple really. Those without the nerve or talent to write still feel they've the right to destroy those that do. And that's the saddest part of all. Me, I've got no talent for writing fanfiction and lack the nerve to post what I have written. So if I don't like what's been written I do my best not to flame but still say why I don't like what's posted. Any errors I notice have got to be pretty big as I can't spell without a spell checker.

This is awful

This is unbelievably sad

Interesting story but dead as a door nail. If the author wish to dispute this claim simply update it. Though after 11yrs. I doubt that'll ever happen. Thus this is another dead fanfic story.

Very surprising that we have to sacrifice the protagonist of the story with a washed out,plain,freckled girl witout any special attributes and live his real soulmate Hermione who at sixteen was the epitome of intelligence,body harmony(in the cinema and description) and warmth with a Weasly Ron better characterised as a glorified... is acolossal mismatch...

I can never see Hermione with Ron like in cannon. Her and Harry yes. Harry and one or two others at the same time along with Hermione, sure! But the normal Ron is a total moron. However, your Ron's turning into someone I could see with her. Though, he's still jealous of everything and anything that Harry has or gets. Once he matures out of that phase, then he'll truly be worthy of Hermione and her love. Now Harry and Ginny, not something I can see. Not even your portrayal of her. I just feel Harry should have someone better. Though I really can't explain what that better is or should be. Sorry about that.

Knight Rider, Star Trek? What else are you planning on adding to this?! I AM NOT COMPLAINING IN THE SLIGHTEST! I happen to think this is as Ron often says "Brilliant!" But I must ask you WHY THE HELL DUMBLEDORE INSISTS ON FAILING TO TRAIN HARRY FOR FIVE YEARS?! THEN THERE'SHIS "POOR EXCUSE" FOR FORCING HARRY TO LIVE WITH THOSE THINGS THAT'RE SUPPOSED TO BE HIS " ONLY "LIVING RELATIVES! The old man is an extremely poor excuse for a human being. Not to mention a caring person.

How intriguing I've never seen/read a written trailer before.

Nice story but dam was that last chapter weird

Things are getting heavily in favor of Voldemort and his forces and it seems the dark is several steps ahead of the light. I wonder if the Jedi that are in transit will arrive in time to help?

Nope, sorry. Can't see this as a Harry/Ginny story.

Just doesn't feel right.

Great story so far please continue this story soon