Ah Charade, how you were awesome in game and only available as a NPC in III, lest one used an Action Replay or Gameshark... I honestly love the battle scene with it. Though also, Yun-Seong and Seung Mi-Na are still different as well. Despite following the name change, do which you prefer as... well, Namco honestly should not have changed their names mid-flow. Though good work as always.

A caring and sympathetic Taki is a rare and always a pleasant thing to see due to how she has been trained to retain her stoic if not callous persona. A facade if you will. Along with her frustrations to normally attain what she can and desires with immense ease it is also realistic that this method of attaining information let alone anything will not work on everyone. Though at the end I visualized Siegfried's terror and thought of how I would react in that situation-sadly I don't think I would have run fast enough...though nicely done.

Undead...decapitate, and then dismember them. Easiest way to rid yourself of the problem. (thinks of zombies) I could use some of that medicine though. I'd love a good long sleep. Yet, very well written as always. Also, I can sympathize with Siegfried's stubbornness, yet, most people actually choose to retreat from what causes them pain instead of dealing with it head-on. All-in-all, he is not weak (in this case) he is simply human.

Going nice! Your have quite the skill to write.

Wow! I'm impressed...

Really loved it
Thank you for this great story :)

I slightly feel the urge to shout: 'Sieg and Taki!' but I will refrain from doing so. Though she has every right to be suspicious after a child could detect her with ease. Link on the other hand, heh, poetic haha. It did sound slightly poetic. Mardok, it makes me think of Tekken's Marduk. Lol, nicely done.

Ah, the brotherly/friendly pact. After he asked 'promise me' I thought damn, forced promise. Though it truly shows the background of how each of them have learned their swordplay, where a young Siegfried, which actually seems fairly true, fought learning hatred and no restrictions even while sparring. Link on the other hand sparred but would never aim to cause injury or even taunt his opponent.

Always a pleasure to read Icy.

Pretty awesome!

Heh, I wish I could write like that, my friend, I guess I will continue to watch your work. Good Job! And always keep writing.

Emotions and lies are what twist our being so, the truth shall forever be as fleeting as love and life. I actually drew that while reading Siegfried's ailments, if you will. A very powerful chapter drawing and playing with his emotions. Very nicely done.

The plot is fantastic!

*Thumbs up* Nice! I liked this one more. Thanks for writing it!

Ok, this is it! AWESOME! EPIC! DAMN!

HAHA, the last one is for, Damn! I don't want it to end! Fantastic story! Can't wait for the sequel.

At last! Damn! It's like they were fighting forever! Wonder what's next!