still love this storyI think I've read it three or four times now

Such a good story! I really enjoyed the read and definitely appreciated the research you put into it.

Interesting first chapter! Everyone's very in character

My only complaint is that the author's notes in the story are distracting. If it's important just put it at the end

Me encanta este par son un amor de humor y pasión, gracias por la historia y por favor sigue escribiendo de este par u otros

You do realize that what Kaiba did to Joey is felony sexual assault, right? Non-consensual penetration by a foreign object. That isn't just a 'pretty heavy scene.' It was a damaging, disgusting assault that you're trying to pass off as okay because a) Kaiba's cock wasn't involved, b) Joey owes him a debt, and c) Kaiba apparently loves him. None of that makes sexual assault okay, and that you've ended by proposing that it is completely ruined an otherwise interesting story. I will not be proceeding to the sequel.

I love this

Dude, Kaiba, you shoved your fingers up his ass. I count that as doing something.

Man you really weren't kidding with the whole "there is no grey for Kaiba" thing were you?

It is three in the morning and I am trying to not squeal with delight and 'I can't handle it' because fucking Seto Kaiba called Jou mutt then motherfucking PUPPY. I died a bit and took a short vacation to cuteness heaven.

Jou: "Are you going to whore me out?"
Seto: "*creepy fucking stage whisper* /Only to myself./" (Just put his words into italics in your head and you get the idea.)

Interesting, things just keep getting more and more... Interesting.

I'm gonna take a wild guess and say that this story, the eleventh chapter ends with Kaiba finding out that Jou is blind.

Whoa hey, going blind, just got electrocuted, then his dad beats the tar outta him? Jou has a really shitty life.

And now all indication of thoughts are gone and it's much harder than before, I preferred the at least to nothing...

That is probably the best thing ever! Jou got electrocuted! It's not awesome that he got /electrocuted/, just the fact that I am sadistic and greatly enjoy my characters suffering, I loved that you had him get seriously hurt, on top of going blind.

Why did you change the format? Instead of italics, thoughts are indicated by and that was really confusing.

I LOVE THE IDEA SO MUCH I AM GOING INSANE. I DIDN'T EVEN READ THE REST OF THE SUMMARY UNTIL I FINISHED THE CHAPTER. I HAVE WAITED FOR SOMEONE TO DO AN AU WHERE JOU IS GOING BLIND AND MY PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED BY THE FANFICTION GODS.

WHATTTT
JUST HAPPENED
THIS SEQUEL OMG I NEED TO GO SEE IF IT EXISTS YET
BTW, 21 IS MY FAVE NUMBER. JUST THOUGHT ID ADD THAT, FOR BACK WHEN YOU WERE 21 AND ALL.
but fabulous, this story is amazing. I love how you made it so difficult for Joey to say what was wrong, and how Kaiba just outright confessed the love. I love this story, one of the best puppyshipping fics ive ever read, and I say that a lot, but this time I MEAN it. even I do not have the skill to make Joey such a level character, or Kaiba fit who he's suppose to be. I enjoyed reading this a lot. great writing, characters, relationships, and dialogue! I hope SERIOUSLY THAT THE SEQUEL EXISTS, IM GOING TO GO CHECK RIGHT NOW ;)