Lovely! Thank you for sharing!

this is moving really fast and severes is really out of character

aw, so cute

Oh My gosh, I nearly fainted when I saw these two lines together: "Hermione settled into the small room that was reserved for the seminar. She was surprised to find out how very few potions masters/mistresses there were. I guess Professor Snape was right; it is an elite society." You NEVER switch perspectives in such a situation! With the exception of dialogue and a few specific situations, you don't switch a story that is completely in the third person to the first person! Just had to point it out! Great story, though!

JD

Great story. I thought you did very well with keeping them in character and were very creative in the way that you had Lucius torturing Hermione in her dreams. Thanks!

I like it.

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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

Cool, that was really neat.

Thanks,

Mave

I want to congradulate you again; your piece really brought out the originality of the characters. You actually managed to capture Severus's specific sarcasm, no small feat for any author on fanficiton.

Rather good. I encourage you to keep writing (though if I may say so, that little part at the end was not required).

Hi, Celtic Words,

first I want to say I like your story - for a first fanfic it is not bad at all.

Although I have to admit that the beginning chapters were a little bit "long" and the persons were acting a little bit "childish" - but really not so bad that I would have stopped reading (please excuse me for not putting on the write words, english isnt my first language). But the longer the plot went the better becames it: your idea with this kind of dream world is rather good, and the demeanor of Hermione and Severus was also becoming more upgrown in some way, also the problems they had to face with partaking their minds and memories...

And thank you for adding the well done final chapter seventeen!

i like this fic and i can't wiat to finish reading it eventually...ugh..vacation...i do agree wtih severus' cruel remark though (atleast i would if it were real life, i've been burned too lol

blessed be

Raven

Congratulations on completing your first fic. I enjoyed following this story very much. Well done. Thanks.

:'( This was an excellent story. I'm sad that it has finally come to an end. Could you possibly write another chapter or story about years later? ...with their kids? ...Thank you for this!