I can't believe you put in a H2O just add water reference. Brilliant! I've never read any Fanfics with a H2O reference. :) but why didn't Ginny change too?

Really good story, I'm loving all the different new ideas and the deeper insight into some of the less seen characters. Thanks for sharing and I hope life is treating you well.

oh my... so many changes...
eagerly awaiting to read more :)

I'm glad I finally decided to read this story. It's very good and original and it's obviously long going with how many years its been since it was first posted. I wonder what happened to Snape. Obviously Voldy did something to him. I like what's going on between Draco and Lavender. It's original as far as I've read in these HP stories and very surprising. I also love the powers of the Chosen, especially Harry's vampire ones. I certainly wished I was Ginny when he put the moves on her with his powers and definitely when he was searching for her. Anyway, loving this story. Please update soon. :-)

great chapter

Love the Story so far

Amazing storyline. Woven like a true sorcerer. The paths you have thought up in this story become increasingly more complex and yet they are logical and enjoyable reading. The only thing I would suggest is that since all four have been chosen then all four should be able to mindspeak. I think this would allow the battle situations to flow more smoothly. Don't forget that Harry can manipulate all four elements as this would help out also in aiding the rest of the group in their efforts. Also, don't forget that absorbing their familiars back into their core would increase their magic strengths. Can't wait for the next installment.

I am thoroughly enjoying your story. It is well thought out and crafted. You should be proud. I am a 62 year old reader of fan fic and though I am a technical writer proof reader, I do not possess the skill to write fiction. That being said, I know what I like and am an avid reader of sword and sorcery and science fiction. You, my dear, have a gift, so let it blossom and flourish and it will repay you beyond your wildest imagination. Again, thank you for the very enjoyable prose.

Tough chapter, in a way. Moral dilemmas are so hard. I feel for Harry, and for Ginny. Interesting we don't see Hermione's reaction. Very intriguing developments with Draco and Lavender. I've been waiting for this for awhile. But now Snape is on to Draco.

Brilliant. As always!

One other thing is really annoying and that the entire Alpha thing. Harry is tiny, which is why he makes a great seeker. Of the four of them Ron is easily the alpha based on lupine behavior which is based on size, strength, and aggressiveness all of which Ron far exceeds Harry in.

Because it makes no sense at all everytime I read about Harry being alpha it makes me think of a sad little boy who has to have his mother tell him he's best at everything to assuage his weak little spirit. As such it makes me really dislike Harry because its almost like everyone else has to pretend he's the alpha to keep him from pouting when they all know it isn't true.

Hermione could not have survived what malfoy did to her. Now I know your story has a lot of unbelievable things in it but that thats impossible. She would have bled out in minutes.

FINALLY! *exasperated face*

Oh like the classes!

Wow, this is getting very interesting!