Nine years after it was written, it is still as perfect. This is a fantastic description of RonDraco and how they manage to work so well while still not really working at all, you know? Wonderful.

you have managed to write why ron/draco works and you have written it much more eloquently than i ever could.

perfect.

Once again, brilliant.

I liked this. Good use of repetition and a nice insight into Ron and Draco's feelings for one another. I thought this was such a funny line:
"He wasn’t even a paradoxically brilliant idiot, the kind you could have a secret, embarrassing sort of respect for. He was just Weasley. An idiot."
The perfunctory 'An idiot.' at the end just makes me laugh and laugh. I also really, really loved the introduction. What a clever way to start a story! Anyways, sorry for the disjointed feedback, but great job.

Cool.

Very good take on sublimated lust. I like the short, to the point internal dialogues in this work.

*wow*

That was gorgeous... haunting... surreal... simply beautiful! :)

Nice character piece. I especially liked your description of Draco and Ron in the beginning and how they are like literary architypes (I hope that makes sense).

That was cool I don't know just how to say it but it's really good.

Hugs&Kisses

ziggy Greenleaf

Oh, GUH. This is so short and simple, yet astounding in it's deep and drool-worthy brilliance. The fact that you could write this in it's short and awesomely themed way just makes it all the more brilliant. I love it. I am without words.

..Except all those words I just wrote. Ahem.

Adding to favourites. Guh. Wow.

*claps* Brilliant.

You really have a handle on the two of them, gave an explination WHY R/D works so well... Oh yes, lovely indeed. Now, more! Go write more!

XOxoXO

Dee