I spent seasons yellin at her to get with greg and she just now gets it! DUH! lol POST SOON!

i really enjoy reading this story,

sara is right, either grissom needs to act on his emotions or leave it behind, i've been in that situation before, it's not nice.

Greg, always the amazing friend, he needs to deal with his issues too though..i hope they can learn from eachother, the are starting to already.

wonderful chapter :)

This was a very good story. I was on my seat the entire time. beleive me.

LS~

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I realized I missed a thing or two - it should probably be the "fury that *threatened* to erupt," not 'tempted to...' but that's my mistake. By and large, though - excellent work. You've a way of capturing these characters that is at once poignant and utterly believable. Keep up the great work, and best of luck with exams! (And, thank you for the kind words... *)

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Regards, and Starry Nights,

~Sabriel.

Great job! Update soon! Love it!

Hey! You're back! Good chapters. Wonder where Sara will go from here? Wonder if Grissom will go to Greg for advice? :) Now wouldn't that be a twist? Keep writing and update soon!

LS!
I'm glad that you liked my adaptations, but to give credit where credit is due, the power of this fic lies mostly in your poignant, very accessible prose... I think most of us readers have been in a similar state of mind (if not as dark as Sara's) and you write her ascent out of it with hope and strength... through your words, you inspire. *grins* Sorry, it sounds sappy, but it's truer than you might think. The power of language is kind of crazy that way...
Notably, I liked what you did with the beginning; I'm glad you put some more context in, it concreted the physical setting and complemented the emotional setting you had already created. As well - a favorite part had to be Sara's musings on Grissom as the "beginning of the pain..." Well done. -
Best of luck with writing Ch. 12 - a demon-and-Grissom-confronting Sara should be interesting to write, to say the least!
Keep up the good work, and Regards from beta-land,
~Sabriel.

Gee, getting Grissom to admit something about his feelings. That's like pulling teeth. Keep writing and update soon!

It's a waonderful story so far! Keep up the great work and wright more soon!

EE! Awesome as always! I'm glad there's more to come; I was afraid this one had fallen off!

I really, really like the last two chapters. You make Sara's inner struggle believable and I cannot wait to see what will happen next.

Oh,Sara you poopy! You have to let him in,because if you don't,you're life will not get any wants to help,so let don't know what you will be missing if you don' have to let someone in,and who better than someone who knows exactly how you feel about everything your questioning.
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I recently was reading older stories and stumbled over this one and I totally loved it. Being a former cutter, chapter 8 especially got to me. You're brilliant..keep writing!

Aw, Greggy left his number! Thankie for your review of Survivor! I should have the next one up within the week; my stupid account's locked for some reason...

Spelling errors! How thoughtful of Greg. Keep writing and update soon!