Reviews for Shine
Windyandstormy chapter 1 . 22h
Thank you for the story!
ambereyes55 chapter 19 . 5/21
Beautifully written. Love it. Thanks for sharing...
Guest chapter 4 . 5/17
Because she's already heard from Will that he tries to do good in the world it doesn't make sense that she would immediately believe bad things about him from a new untried acquaintance. The fact that affable charles doesn't like him should make her think twice.
Anonymous chapter 19 . 4/15
I loved this story when I first read it and read it many times over. I was very disappointed to reread it and find all sorts of changes. I really liked this story so much better before it was altered and am terribly sad to see it so different.
Bristol chapter 19 . 3/17
Perfect.
lj chapter 18 . 3/14
The last chapter was too short. I'm glad there's still more to read now that they're together :D so sweet
lj chapter 17 . 3/14
Been waiting for this for forever! I love it!
lj chapter 16 . 3/14
Yes, excited to see Will back in the story line. And Marianne and Cole: how sweet!
forcverandalways chapter 19 . 3/12
I'm actually sobbing right now. Proper sobbing in the front of the car as I'm bent over my phone. I'm so happy they got engaged, they both deserve it so much. You're a great writer, well done, this is brilliant x
forcverandalways chapter 18 . 3/12
Cryinggggg. This is so beautiful and these two are so freaking cute and you write them so WELL. Great job, this is amazing xxx
forcverandalways chapter 11 . 3/11
I genuinely thought it was a coincidence that Will's hall was called Donwell Hall until Marianne turned up. I'm loving how you've put so many of Jane Austen's characters and places in this story!
lj chapter 15 . 3/7
Ex girlfriend! I love how interested Beth is in knowing about her. Totally realistic. What drama this chapter had! All the good stuff from sense and sensibility and now Emma. I love the crossover idea! It's really cool. Is Cole going to swoop in now and finally woo marianne? Loved the tiny glimpse of Knightley too.
I really enjoyed the angst in this one. Can't wait for Will to make his reappearance either!
lj chapter 14 . 3/7
Aaaagh, you are evil for that cliff hanger kiss. Evil! (I love it)
lj chapter 13 . 2/28
Interesting with Lydia. I have a feeling something big and bad is on its way. I liked Anna's character and that they're twins rather than the big age difference
LJ chapter 12 . 2/28
I like to see them growing closer so naturally. But who's this brunette!? (It's his sister...isn't it...) Or do we finally get to see Caroline Bingley?
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