| Reviews for Winner |
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   Silenciosa chapter 1 . 1/26/2014 Simply perfect *thumps up* |
| Greenputt chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 Now while i admit some bits of this fic seemed to jump from place to place i really enjoyed this story. I guess that is one of my weaknesses reading the story and the idea behind it rather than the actual writing :P I really enjoyed the way you changed POV at appropriate times and not to often so as to confuse the reader. Now while there wasn't as much drama as some Gt/Tr fics i've read i really enjoyed this possibly just because i felt like some fluff at the time, oh well congrats on it anyway. Will definitely be reading a few more of your fics now and def if you do more DBZ :D |
| demon thing chapter 11 . 10/30/2007 awesome, i think is the only one of the dbz dudes who doesn't get not cute when he hits puberty, hehe. anyway love the story |
| Blinded-by-shadows chapter 7 . 9/12/2007 OMG! I Luv it. It's so cute and fluffy!:) |
| AnoAna chapter 11 . 12/23/2006 Youve convinced me. Sequel, Sequel! Please? Its really good. |
| KariHatsuKito chapter 8 . 1/23/2006 Yeah, I would prolly turn their ages up to 11 and 10. Preteens usually get into that stuff at that age. Well, I'm reviewing for the whole story so you know! I think it's one of the best stories ever! Onegai, update soon, really soon! |
| YEHUDIS chapter 11 . 11/5/2004 OKAY IREALLY THINK TRUNKS IS WAY TO PARANOID AND WOW GOHAN IS SO COOL DOES GOTEN AND TRUNKS EVER ACTUALLY DO ANYTHING ELSE OTHER THAN KISS EACH OTHER NOT THAT I AM COMPLAINING OR ANYTHING BUT COME ON A LITTLE MORE WOULD BE GOOD NO? OKAY I REVIEW WICH I NORMALLY DONT I WOULD REALLY LIKE TO CREATE MY OWN FIC BUT I HAVE NO CREATIV BONE IN ME I CAN BARELY TELL A STORY NOT MY STRONG POINT:)~ |
| Lovekakarot chapter 1 . 9/20/2004 I Love Truten! you are a great Truten YAOI writer! Do you know you are one of my favorite authors? please write more Truten fanfictions! Thank you |
| MarkPrinceRoxas chapter 11 . 8/3/2004 YAY! Chibi Truten is the best! Your story ruled! |
| leelee chapter 9 . 7/8/2004 I'd loved to see a part 2...I love the story so far! |
| Someone chapter 11 . 6/26/2004 Nice fanfic! I gotta say i have read a lot of fanfics before but this one is my favorite! What is the sequel to it, cuz u said u were gonna make one. if it hasn't been made, then i request that u make it. email be the sequel's name would ya? thnx |
| Maria chapter 11 . 6/18/2004 Aw, so KAWAII! |
| Ravenpan chapter 11 . 4/4/2004 I enjoyed this quite much! |
| Infin Winter chapter 11 . 2/10/2004 Aw! So cute! |
| ChibiLoner chapter 11 . 1/4/2004 Aww... That was such a cute fanfic... At first, I thought they were actually older... and not kids... but meh, I eventually found out. I love sappy stuff sometimes... XD It was just so nice sometimes, I started crying... XD XD XD I'm such a hopless romantic... Lovely fic. I shall go read the next one now... I'll review on that one too. - I loved this. So cute... |
