come back this is such an amazing story. I want to see how it ends! This should be considered torture how this story is ending, it's like Usagi will be alone forever... T_T

It was really mean of u to not complete the story. Just as it was getting good... So peeved.

Mkay, well you've waited plenty long enough to make an update, so you need to update like right now. If you need help or ideas or anything, you let me know I'll do my best but seriously. WHAT THE FRIGGIN HECK! YEARS! COME ON! Update. UPDATE!

Now I want you to listen to my instructions VERY carefully and follow them. Watch Gundam Wing Endless Walts, in subtitles on Youtube. com

Go to Mangafox. com and read the manga for Sailor Moon.

Now reread your FAVORITE gundamwing/sailormoon story.

Now REREAD your story.

I promise, afterall of that you will be inspired and you will update and if anything else, I am at your beck and call. We need more writers back in the gundam wing/sailor moon section. We need updates and finished stories. This is me begging you. Your story is amazing and deserves to be finished. Please do all of the above and PM me if you need my help otherwise I hope to see an update within the month.

UPDATE YOUR STORIES! I read your profile I care c: and the artist fir . is on c: you can commision now UPDATE!

Are you dead now? Coz if you're still alive.. Could you finish your story Biatch!

Please finish this story. It is reallly good.

So five years ago, you stopped updating... But you know what, that last sentence is powerful. I'm assuming you won't update this story and in my opinion, it doesn't need an conclusive ending. I like how the ending of this chapter allows the reader to make up an ending for themselves.

This story has made me have faith in reading fanfiction again. I'm hoping that Ill find other writers on this site who are as into plot and well-written as you.

Sorry I was too lazy to review the last couple of chapters... I can't remember which one but there was one that I didn't have much to say as the chapter wasn't very interesting to me...

I do like the Hiiro/Haruka interactions... I do find that sometimes Rei's tsundere qualities are overbearing on some parts and makes her lose her tsundere ranking as if she's always yelling but she's still mostly in character.

Usagi stays perfectly in character IMO. Good job.

This chapter has been one of my favorites so far, actually.

I'm tired and don't remember if I reviewed the last few chapters... I kinda liked the Usagi/Hiiro moment in the classroom with Usagi running to hug him. Some of Usagi's dialogue was slightly awkward to me... Only slightly.

In the last chapter, although I did like Michiru and Hiiro's exchange of words, I had the same issue with the dialogue that I did with Usagi and him.

The scene where Makoto talks about not being able to transform was really realistic. It reminded me of when my mom lost her baby, how difficult certain conversations were, how my mother often blamed herself for the sadness we all felt as a family as we would constantly have these silent moments that were thick with deep, sincere gloom.

There are some moments that I do think you put Rei slightly ooc by making her too easily peeved even for the anime version of her. However, in general, I do commend you for keeping everyone in character.

Yay! Relena will be on here! I love her and I hate how people tend to bash her on their fics and sometimes make her out to be mean and a whore. _

I loved the porcelain doll part... It made me think of Casablanca Memories and the episode in the original Sailor Moon season where Rei takes Mamoru to see the porcelain dolls exhibit. I really liked that episode.

I also loved how Usagi came to realization that Rei was just as lost as she was...

Haruka's part was amazing! _ I also love your references to the past of SM in your writing; it keeps it realistic and canon-like.

The omake: One word: cute! _ Maybe I should find a more masculine word for it... Eh, cool. _ And funny!

I liked how you didn't do the obvious and make Duo see Rei suddenly and make them go into conversation... I've seen it too many times and most of the time, it's not written believably well-enough.

Oh there was one misspelling: basest should've been basis. If there were others, I don't remember and I am doing the review on my phone so it's probably not as detailed as my usual reviews.

Another great job. Onto the next chapter before I go to sleep and then deal with work in less than ten hours... Aye, stupid Walmart.

Chapter two was really good. I actually loved your dialogue between all the characters even the crazy theory of Ami's. It reminded me of when Usagi learned in the manga that once that star seed is taken from a senshi, they lose existence and their family and friends forget of their life...

So it sounds like Mamoru did suicide? Interesting...

Loved how you had Hiiro and Usagi's very different perspective on death described as you wrote when they spoke together... The meeting was perfect... I could imagine it in the anime if it wouldve ever crossed over...

Rei's initial reaction to Ami's theory was very realistic...

Your grammar was really good also, no missing words, and your descripion was perfect.

Good job!

Onto the next chapter!

Wow, nice intro to the story... I found myself hooked within seconds. I don't usually read Usagi centered fics as I'm more of a Rei fan but I love her too.

I like how you kept Hiiro's personality in tact and you kept his brain the way I'd imagine it to think if he saw the image that he saw. Oddly, his seeing Usagi reminded me of when he first met his love interest canonically.

Well, onto the next chapter.

Is chapter 15 the last chapter? Is that how it ends? I'm a bit sad. I hope there's more but if not then that's okay too.

Why did you stop, there is a need for a better ending if that is really the end. The ending leaves you hanging, wanting it to end but it doesn't. Please finish it.