Oh, I can't wait for the sequel! Anyways, great job with this fic! I thought it was superb! So... you did a fabulous job! :P

I love it, and I can't wait for the sequel!

i fell a bit embarrased that a review from me is very late in coming, but after reading it i just had to leave a comment. fantastic story - the characters were well portrayed and the hartia/lai bits were well done also. i hope you'll carry on writing fics, no matter what they are on, because your writing is a pleasure to read.

Hey, I liked the end! Thanks for finishing!

great fanfic, I love the pairing of Hartie an Lai, i hope to read more stories writen by you some time soon!

That was so cute! (Jumps out of chair and squeezes the life out of the nearest living thing).
I absolutely loved it that was just perfect. I've always wanted someone to write a fic where Orphan finaly meets back up with all his friends including the one's he left behind at the Tower of Fangs. So, thank you.
And again I must thank you for writing this, this is my favorite Lai/Hartia fic ever! I love them so much, their just perfect together, their my fav. couple and I love watching and reading about them too.
Also I'd like to thank you for thanking me, though I must thank you again for writing this and for thinking of a sequel to this already wonderful fic!
~Seeker
PS I'll be sure to read and review the sequel the next time you write. Well, until then!

Yay! _ I loved this story so much, as I do all you're other fanfictions! You're just such a talented writer!
Great job, you wrote the best Hartia/Lai fiction I've ever read!
Keep on writing! _
~Raven

I don't often read Orphen fics, but I really liked this one. I'll look forward to the end!

Ya terminé de subir tdos los capítulos, espero con ansias el siguiente (o los siguientes)
Me despido ahora
Besos!

That was the most adorable Lai/Hartia fanfic I have ever read! Their closness, feelings, emotions and love for each other is so evident it is as if it is you experiencing the warmth, love, and comfort that you portrayed with these splendidly beautiful characters.
This is a story that will stay with me and a story I will continue to re-read like a great noval or book. You are a fantastic writer and I look foreward to reading more of your work.

~Seeker
P.S. Definetly write a sequel. You can be sure I'll read and review all your chapters. Besides it 'll be sad to see it end even if all things must.
Hartia and Lai are the sweetest couple and there's not enough out there for them and so for that I must amend and thank you for writing this lovely fic.

*sniffles* That was perfect! So rarely do you find someone who actually portrays Hartia as something other than a sniveling idiot. You have no idea how much I appreciate that! I really hope that you do write a sequal. If you do, I'll definately be reading it!

A very sweet and fluffy chapter. Hartia and Lai were so cute together! Lai falling to sleep in Hartia's arms was very touching.
A sequel is a great idea!
Update soon!

Ive enjoyed this fic. And yes please do write a sequel. I would definatly read it. Anyway there isnt nearly enough Hartia/Lai out there for my tastes. I think their cute together. Good work. Youve done a good job with this.

Wow, I love this story! I actually read it the entire way through, because I enjoyed it so much. I really love the idea of pairing Lai and Hartia, it's sweet _ I hope you continue the story, I wanna read the end!
Good luck with it!
~Christa

really wonderful fic! ::nodds:: I love it a lot _ keep up the great writin