Good really good, I don't mean to me mean, but you do know the real reason Jack lost the Black Pearl? Right? But hey I'm not trying to bring you down, I did it once before. I had a 'League' story about Dorian Gray. But anywhoo it's a good story and hope to hear more POTC from ya.

Peace Out.

Jean McNeice

ps I have my own POTC story you should read it, that is if you haven't already.

You haven't updated in ages! Did your math textbook eat you? Has your keyboard run away?
Come on back and finish this fic! Right away..or Ye'll be cursed with aztec gold...um..riight... :P

Oh is Monice going to be left on the island with Jack? What is gonna happen to them? Please update soon your story is one of my favorites

That is a really cool quote at the end of this chapter... It should be in a movie its so great! This chapter reminds me a little of the beginning of Moulin Rouge, because it is after someone got their heart broken. If you haven't seen that movie, I would recommend it. Please keep writing!

WHY DO YOU HAVE TO STOP IT HERE? KEEP ON GOIN! PLEASE!

update soon! haha i love jack although he is pretty OOC. Monice is pretty cool too although she does get annoying at times. keep going!

Ok well i had to leave a review later, but your story is so incredibily funny! update soon, and ya Jack seems more umm...dark or something anyways...good story
-emma436

hm..i just started reading this (yes i no there are more chapters ahead) but i have just one thing to say...JACK WOULD NEVER SHOOT A MAN FOR TALKING TOO MUCH! sorry maybe Jack did have a point to shoot him because he is a perve but i still think that Jack would never shoot a man for no reason...other than that tiny detail...so far your story is awesome! i will read on!

lol! love the way you developed Monice! very funny! very effective! love the story keep it up! *hugs*

*~Leila~*

oops, I take my words from the last chapter back... she sure didn't take things too lightly... -_-

She took her family dying a little too happily, in my opinion, at least. But otherwise it was a good chapter!

that sure was different. But I love it just because of that. Your writing skills are very good, and, may I say, I find it amusing hom stupid monice is.. I don't 'stupid' in a mean way, if you catch my meaning.

GREAT story. I just read all your chapters and now I've procrastinated far enough. I must venture into the world of work. School. [BOO]

Not the mutiny! NO! oh gawrshness. i LUV Monice. tis a wonderful story luv, and your going on my fav story list so i know when your nest chappies gonna come out!

much luv and gram crackers

icing :P

OMG! A cliffhanger! Gr! *glares*...well as long as you update soon, you'll still get a cookie. I wonder what they'll do with poor Monice? Confuse her maybe...no that would be too easy...lol. Anyhoo, Good Job!