| Reviews for Embrace Me In Love |
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   IndeChan chapter 4 . 9/19/2011 Awsome! Too bad it's discontinoued |
| Shadow Girl chapter 4 . 12/6/2008 I agree completely with the others. Are you going to update or not? 'Cause if not, at least, tell us. |
| jdcocoagirl chapter 4 . 11/27/2008 i know this is story is been a long time and i love the plot i'm hoping that you have plans on updating this story. it is very nice and i love the interaction of the characters even its minimal |
| Sabsters chapter 4 . 9/21/2007 so are you going to update this or not? I am really getting tired on being hung up on a story that isn't even gonna be updated.. So save us all the misery and tell us if you're gonna update this or not.. |
| fallenhime.xo chapter 4 . 5/22/2007 Update!the suspense is kiling me. Im sad becuz of u so if u feel gulity it's against ure consicense so please, plz plz update. Oh yea and I'm putting ure story on alert. I've got me eyes on you! joking lol ~~Miko-Princess-Hanyou |
| Streaming Radiant Fire chapter 4 . 5/12/2007 NO! YOU CAN'T STOP THERE! CONTINUE COMTINUE CONTINUE! I WANT A NEW CHAPTER! PLEASE! |
| Meca Vegeta chapter 4 . 1/29/2007 are you going to continue this fic? |
| snOopdOg chapter 4 . 4/6/2006 UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!.. DO NOT LEVE THIS STORY OR ELSE YOU WILL DIE! |
| Priestess Kohana chapter 4 . 10/13/2005 You have not updated in over a year! And the story was getting super good, even though it was great already! oh! I really hope you get this review...fantastic story! ~Kohana |
| his-little-troll chapter 4 . 6/27/2005 while your grammar isn't the best, and your story is 90% dialogue, I really do like this story. It has a great plot, and its semi reality based. Sure, the characters are OOC, and a few parts could've been explained in more detail, but the actual story isn't half bad. One thing,, try not to use the same words and or verbs several times in the same sentence/paragraph/dialogue. Ex: Akane cried...and cried...and cried. She just could stop crying. Try substituting sobbing for crying in the last sentence. That way it does sound so simple, it makes it SOUND more complex and deeper. |
| lOserFACEladiie chapter 4 . 6/17/2005 omg! you need to finish this story! i've been waiting since forever! seriously! i love it,its great. Oohh yea. and i was wondering if you owned my space because on one of the lines you put "SOATOME" its kinda still there. but then! update soon! |
| Angela Jewell chapter 4 . 3/7/2005 great story. I hope you're still working on it... ( |
| Domie chapter 4 . 2/23/2005 UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDAT UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE THIS IS A TERRIFIC FANFIC! WOW! |
| Svenja chapter 4 . 9/15/2004 please do the next chapter! I'm very excited about it and I've waited for so long!Please hurry up! and by teh way This storry is one of the best I've ever rode! so please mail me when you have the next chapter up dated! Svenja! |
| michi chapter 4 . 9/14/2004 all 4 chapters r great...pls do continue! |
