Reviews for One Day
RainDomonforever chapter 7 . 12/28/2003
MORE MORE MORE!
Golden gril 2002 chapter 5 . 8/26/2003
What kind of angle is she? A 30 degree or a right angle?
Jen23 chapter 7 . 8/17/2003
Just thought you should know that I enjoyed your story.
Maeko-Nohara chapter 7 . 8/16/2003
Maeko- NO! NONONONONO! tell me it's not over! NO! *dies* it's too short! it's too good! WHY IS THERE NO MORE? *passes out*

Kyoji- *looks disturbed* well ShawTi-san, i guess it's up to you to figure out if a reaction like that was good or not. *sigh* Mae-chan got a little...um...what's the word? hyper, upset...stuff like that.

*A SIGN APPEARS*

Sign- why is this over? it's so good! IT'S NOT FAIR! SEQUAL! SOMETHING! ANYTHING! *dies*

YOu're certainly welcome about the reviews! I unfortunately review more often than update, so...please remember my story, I swear that i WILL update. I just don't know when.
Conquerer Worm chapter 7 . 8/16/2003
*cries* Wah! It's over! *Wails* I loved this story so much! Even Leggy liked it! (Which is a first!)

Legolas:*sniffle*

Me: Aw...it was just too cute! But man, Domon! Why did it have to be a dream! Why? But I suppose it is a good way to handle the end.I can't believe it's over... this my my favorite multiple chappie luff! ;.; Oh well. I guess it had to end sometime. And you need to finish it on a good note! :D So this was an excellent story. Kudos to yu! *Pours a dump truck full of Kudo bars on Shadow's head* Hehe. Please right either an epilogue or another fluff soon. And keep up the good work on "The Beginning"!

-Forever and For Always, Sailor Hannah
Another Lone Ranger chapter 6 . 8/14/2003
This is so beautiful! *wipes away a tear and sniffles* I just want to burst into a fit of violence, then have a good cry. Keep writing, I want to read more!
TL-chan chapter 6 . 8/13/2003
This is a very good story. Keep it up.
Conquerer Worm chapter 6 . 8/11/2003
*Dances like a rabies infected fluff freak* This...was...GREAT! Thanks so much for thinking of me when you wrote this! Gah, this is so good! I'm all fidgety now that you left it in an evil cliffhanger! Ack! So... fluffy! Love and live for fluff! And you're right; I would stop reading if it got all citrusy. *Shudders* I would hate to have to stop reading this great fic! E! I just love it! Please continue soon! *Makes big puppy face* Wait a second. That won't work. Now,THIS will work! *possesses Shadow Tigress and makes her finish next chappie* MUAHAHAHA! *Cackles and lightening flashes* Yeah. So in other words, post next chapie...*becomes dark and scary*OR FACE THE CONSEQUENCES! Other then that, no pressure! :P

-Sailor Hannah!
Guess3 chapter 6 . 8/11/2003
Well Shadow tigress, I thought I would reward your undying loyalty to my fics with a little review of my own. I normally don’t write reviews for I find I am not very good at them, I tend to blabber on as I am now, so I apologize in advance.

As far as your story it’s good and at the risk of sounding repetitive it is oh so cute. It could very easily fall into the category of “corny”, but that’s what makes it so damn good. Besides it’s “cornyness” is what makes it a fluff story, a sweet one at that too. Can anyone name a fluff/romantic story that is not “corny”? Most likely no. So any fears you harbor of this “horrid cornyness”, lose. There is no need for them.

The descriptor “cute” comes to my mind, yet again, when I think of the story line or plot. I do find it a little simplistic, but entertaining (in other words not boring, so lose that fear as well). The only real advice I have for you, and I just say this because you asked for ideas after chapter two, is to know where your going with the story. Think ahead and find a destination, that way when you write your not running around in circles or wandering aimlessly from one spot to another with no real story; no real beginning, middle, and end.

And as a closer: I like your story and keep up the great work (that’s my only other advice, however this one is for more of a personal gain as a reader). I can’t wait to see more.

(I told you I’m bad at reviews. Sorry)
Maeko-Nohara chapter 6 . 8/11/2003
Maeko- ShawTi-san, that's perfectly okay! i don't mind! i'm not mad at all! (i've had my share of lemons today...in the Weiss Kreuz department. *wink wink*) this turned out very good! Domon's such a jerk! *pound domon into oblivion*

Domon- HEY! i kissed her! are you happy?

Maeko- no.

Domon: -_-

Maeko- _ anyway! this was great! *dumps cookies onto authoress* reward! your fave kind of cookie! keep writing!

btw. i'm SO out of ideas for my fic. *dies* just to say. *neon sign appears*

Neon Sign- *can you help with ideas?*

yeah...whatever...*makes sign go poof* that was stupid. anyhoo, school starts in TWO DAYS! i have no time! i need to churn out the next chappie AT LEAST before school starts! *dies*
Alfy Kirkland chapter 6 . 8/11/2003
This is great! Write more! I love this story! Its awesome!Update,update,update!
Maeko-Nohara chapter 5 . 8/11/2003
Maeko- are you kidding me Domon? this was an AWESOME chappie! *sticks tongue out*

Domon: -_-

Maeko- gee, stupid. it's a good thing Schwartz is always popping around. lightens the mood.

Domon- not for me!

Maeko- that's the point.

Domon: -_-U

Maeko- _ yeah, i know he's a pain the the a**, so what? it's funny. to me.

oh yeah, no lemon? WHY? *looks around* did i just say that out loud? whoops. i guess it's because i just read a handful of Weiss Kreuz lemons...they were so good...*steps AWAY from her hentai thoughts* Ahem. sorry about that. *sighs* PLEASE KEEP WRITING! as always. _ oh yeah, just to say...i kinda changed my fic around a bit. the summary on the first chappie is different, if ya didn't see it already...
Conquerer Worm chapter 5 . 8/10/2003
AH! So cute! Ack, this is so great. I love this! *Squeels like mad* I need more! MORE, I TELL YOU! Please continue soon! This is robably one of THE most kawaii fics I have ever read. Are D and R gunna kiss? *begs on hands and knees* But then again, in most D/R fics, somehow, their kiss gets interrupted. Not fair! . I really need an update. Starting to get bored of parody fics! (No offense to parody fic writers: I love parodies, it is just getting hard to find a hardcore fluff like this nowadays!) Well, as you can tell, I am enjoying this! Update (or die)!

-Sailor Hannah
Alfy Kirkland chapter 4 . 8/9/2003
This is great! Are you going to update it? I would love to read more.I love this story.
Maeko-Nohara chapter 4 . 8/8/2003
Maeko- THIS WASN'T CRAPPY! IT WAS AWESOME!

Kyoji- because i was in it?

Maeko- ...s-shut up! *whaps kyoji* well...

Kyoji- I KNEW IT! *passes out*

Maeko- O.O anyway...PLEASE WRITE MORE! and update your other fic too...i MUST read more..._ UPDATE!
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