Absolutely gorgeous

holy crap thats awesome

i lurve the language

i lurve the subtlety

it all just... worx

AW! BEAUTIFUL!

You've stirred my passions... not in a dirty way of course, but in a really pleasant way that makes me feel... happy. The story has a very gentle, kind tone, and I'm glad that I read it.

This is probably the only slash story I've seen where the author treated Elizabeth (or any female canon romantic interest) with respect, which you get awesome kudos for.

I love the way you have the interaction between Jack and Will, how they're at once thinking about what's going on and at the same time thinking about their own thought (or at least Jack is; I think Will is being silly and daydreamy).

i have no idea how many times i have read this story but i live it

beutifully writen it reminds me of an old native american painting the way you describe the setting

I don't know much about astronomy either, but thought you may wish to know that the main navigational point used in the South is the Southern Cross, NOT Polaris (the North Star). Polaris cannot be seen once you near the equator, in fact in some places even in the United States (such as Louisiana) it cannot be seen. Very good story though, I've always thought Jack would make good use of the stars for a map!

"I'm Captain Jack Sparrow. I don't need a compass." *How* like Jack is that?
Favourite Stories list as of right now. This is magical and beautiful and absolutely breathtakingly wonderful. There really aren't words to describe this. You've captured the mood perfectly. WOW.

-squees- Wow, that was just...wow. Really well written...you are INCREDIBLY good at this, you know that? This was so cute and fluffy and sweet! -melts-

Cute! I loved it! You have a fantastic writing style. That was just so...fluffy! hehe I really enjoyed reading it and look forward to seeing more PotC fics from you! Jack and Will are just so adorable together! hehe I loved the ending of this. Anyways I just wanted to say you have a wonderful writing talent and you kept them realistic! *grins* *glomps author* *waves*
Later yo,
Icy

Oh, you've gone and made me re-read this. I do like it, yes I do. I'm so glad you read the whole PMF nonsense, I don't get tons of new readers, let alone cognizant ones. Drop me a line, will ye? Muchly obliged. ;

Aw, cute. A nice "first time" fic. Aren't enough of those around. People are too lazy for 'em.

it was almost alright. i always like this pairing but you made them both ooc. jack is too soft towards the end and during the whole thing will is WAY too soft. its hard to tell, they both act like the bitch. sure, make them fall into slashy love, thats fun, but make them act like themselves at least.

it was almost alright. i always like this pairing but you made them both ooc. jack is too soft towards the end and during the whole thing will is WAY too soft. its hard to tell, they both act like the bitch. sure, make them fall into slashy love, thats fun, but make them act like themselves at least.