Reviews for The Protector
Guest chapter 7 . 6/22
Please update, it's a beatiful story ️️️
Ytwong chapter 1 . 11/25/2019
I love this story! Pls continue writing it!
commanderbog chapter 4 . 5/27/2018
Hi, this is Courage Flavored! I enjoyed reading this story so far. I liked how Ranma was introduced as his same cocky self. The part where his boss lured him in to taking the case was funny, because Ranma dragged on and on about how qualified he was to take on the mysterious case. I found that really cute, too. It was kind of like an inside joke between the fans. I like how you repeated the premise of Ranma 1/2 while still remembering to tie in your original idea of him being a body guard. With this new way that "Ranko" is revealed, as his girlfriend, I can tell things are bound to get complicated (lol).

I also liked the small tension you put between Ranma and Nabiki. Nabiki has a keen sense on things going on, and it was a good idea to point that out or at least remind readers that she wouldn't be easy to fool. I can predict that she may be the first to find out about Ranma's "double life". Akane was very believable, and I think her constant anger isn't OOC. It's believeable in the way that you have written it so far.

Kodachi is annoying as always, but I am excited to see how her character will turn out in the rest of the story, like if she wins Ranma's affections or not. (Who knows-I've only read 4 chapters.)

Wonderful start. Usually I'm not a fan of AUs, only canons, but I seriously think that this story of yours is worth reading. I have followed and favorited already. Nice to come across some good stuff once in a while. I've had some luck lately in this fandom with finding amazing stories like this. Good work!

~Courage
15bookworm chapter 7 . 5/20/2017
Ohh pls update. Love this story so much
4Eva Dreaming chapter 6 . 5/13/2014
WOOOOOHOOOOO! THANK YOU! Shampoo doesn't love Ranma! :D
Bobbwa chapter 7 . 1/30/2014
Boo, the good stuff is just starting and there's no more chapters
Teddy's Circus chapter 7 . 8/9/2013
Hello! Ok so im oficially your fan #1. I really liked how you redact! I also agree with lots of modifications you did to this AU. Like, my favorite, Kuno is the new "airen", Ranma and Ranko are different people for Akane and the Tendo family, but Nabiki, of course. I love how Kazumi and Tofu are already in the second base. I always have trouble with one thing in almost every story that, indeed they try to do an AU but following the original tracks of the Ranma1/2 series, they write about the same thing. For example, they put that the reason of Akane's hair cut was because of Ryoga or in a fight. That the reason she went to Dr. Tofu's office with Ranma was because she was bleeding, not because Ranma needed hot water. I like that. I like how you change everything, but without changing it haha that doesnt makes a lot of sense. Anyways, keep doing your thing. Great job and please update quickly. I'll be waiting anxiously for next chapter.
-Teddy's Circus
Elise Veronique A. Ephrem chapter 7 . 6/8/2013
Update plzz very good story :)
Dagoni hide chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Oh, I'm so glad you keep writting The Protector !
THANKS
U-sama chapter 5 . 7/22/2012
I LUV the protecter! Can't wait 4 the next chapter!
Thou shalt not fear chapter 7 . 2/24/2012
wow...just wow
Kimasu chapter 7 . 3/23/2011
Gah! Finding this story now when it hasn't been updated for awhile...Such cruel fate! But what you have here I absolutely adore. Just the way you have tied the actually happenings of the manga and twisted it with your story line is brilliance. I'm still laughing about the first chapter and Ranma's amazing entrance D

Great read! I'll be watching~!
katlykat chapter 7 . 10/16/2010
I am so excited for the next chapter! So far I am really into the story and the plot is really an awesome idea for alternate reality. Now that the main foe has been fully introduced I can't wait for this story to update and find out what else Ranma is going to get himself into! Having Kuno be Shampoo's husband instead of Ranma's was a great plot twist, I love it!
miss koneko chapter 7 . 9/18/2010
LOL! The chaos continues to ensue :)

Looking forward to the next chapter!
Prodigy99 chapter 7 . 8/30/2010
xD! YOU UPDATED! I am loving this story more and more with each chapter and i wonder whether or not kuno will EVER give Akane up and go for shapmoo! that'd be a heck of a happy ending!
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