An excellent addition to the episode. Love the characterisation!

What a perfect addition to The Killing Game. You've caught the characters beautifully - the unstated feelings carefully hidden yet still seeping through. The sort of 'missing scene' all us J/C'ers can only dream about.

Thanks for sharing.

Sweet! I loved this you really should write a sequel or something

I WOULD HAVE LIKED ANOTHER CHAPTER...LIKE IN A FEVERISH STUPOR SHE CALLS FOR CHAKOTAY. SO MANY THINGS IN SICK BAY DESTROYED OR BROKEN THAT SHE NEEDS BASIC FEVER REDUCING REMEDY I.E. SPONGING DOWN WITH LUKE-WARM WATER. HOW DOES THAT SOUND?

Loved it :D

This is a scene that should've been in the episode. Nice interplay between the characters and believable.

Great work!

yet another wonderful tale of the stv crew! this was a nicely added tidbit to one of the many episodes i enjoy! i hope there are more tales of this crew left in your imagination!

I'm normally a fan of longer, action-filled stories, but I loved this one. All your stories are fantastic.

I wish I could write Captain Janeway as you do! This was a fantastic post-episode scene, and entirely true to both characters' personalities. Your narrative flows seemlessly between description, dialog and action in a way that few authors can manage, and one that I have to struggle with. Great work!

Wow, I thought this was an excellent story, you really managed to capture the personality of the characters and not many people manage to successfully achieve that. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

"Kathryn , lean on me" , says it all..

Very nicely done in characterization and storyline.

Killing Game is one of my favorite episodes. This is one of the best episode additions I've every read . It is nice to see one that focus on the J/C friendship and not the romance (not that I don't love J/C together). You see them as leaders and friends. Thanks.

Beautifuly done. Isn't it nice that we can fill in where TPTB left off. Nice ending to a good show. Hope to see more of your writing.

good job!

I like this story, you summed up what the show never really did DESPITE THE FACT that it was a two part epidsode.

By the way, if it was me I would be like

"Forget that Chakotay, you're carrying me... I'm not walking a freaking mile to sickbay while my leg is shot up like a drug dealer running from the cops. You're a big man, deal."

Good story though!