O.o ominous... and intriguing. nicely done.

i just read this so hanging from this cliff, for me, is a piece of cake. you haven't updated in over three years... i feel sorry for your readers who have been hanging on for that long...

this is indeed a unique post-labyrinth fic, attack sarah and destroy the goblin king indirectly. does he teach her how to exorcise the bad guy herself? is she going to meet her other friends? are they going to ever find out what they really mean to eachother? are you going to continue this story or will you inform me(and your other fan's) that you have no intention of finishing it? hmm?

really good story... know what would make it better?... if you finished it!

thanks muchly,

ginny

A. a cliffies! PLease Update

Pleae update soon, this has a good begining...

i like it update danke

good chap! i wonder who this strange person is... or thing... hm... update soon!

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i like it. i will read the rest later but i like it

I'm really loving this story so far. What is the creature, and why does he want Jareth dead? I'm taking it that he's erasing her memories. Also if you haven't linked to your pics yet, I would love to see them.

Enigmatic to say the least. Not without the occassional typo, but well worth the read and sure to improve yet.

Sarah's thoughts about Jareth are fantastic, you do well in staying away from the strictly mundane and over used. I like the freshness.

Great job! :P This is a really well made fic and I can't wait for the next chapter so hurry! *Hugs*

Hey I like you story-it's really great! I am a fan of Labyrinth-even though I am going on 20 years old-please keep me posted when you update it-keep up the good work-later-Miss May

nice story. cna't wait to read more1

oh no! she doesn't know hoggle! that's sad... and strange. this is a really interesting story, better than most labyrinth stories i have read. it actually has a plot, and something is wrong. in most of the ones i read they just had to prove their love to each other, then everything was all happy sappy. :) great story!

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*jaw drops* you have met HIM? i am so smeggin jealous! and you met him? my god, you met him! that is so incredibly unfair, why the smeg doesnt he visit england wah!

um, sorry, review. *refocuses* k, this fic is really good! and jareth and sarah are really IC so many kudos to you! but why the smeg doesnt she remember hoggle? (im presuming its hoggle?)

PLEASE update soon! cos melikes this story very smeggin much!

Ky,

that's a great beginning! i love the mystery and the suspense! unfortunaltly i can't go to the next chapter now. :( but i will when i get the chance. :)

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