Great idea for a story! Personally I would leave Buffy out (much as I love her!), since she's from TV rather than literature, and add Meggie Folchart from Inkheart.

Isabel? As in, Roswell? Cool. I had no idea. Great story!

excellent story, think you'll do another one? try using diffrent chractors. experament!

Interesting group you have put together. Now to click on the next chapter and see how you've brought them all together. :)

very interesting. Although It's a bit hard to keep track of the different characters, particularly with the small amount of difference between the names Jack and Jake, and even Jesse. I can't wait to read more.

although I don't usually read stories like this, this one sounds very interesting. I will return later and read more.

Its always hard to see a good thing end...but you ended this nicely.
So whats your next project?

Good! So what is going on? How are they going to get out?

Kinda a weird chapter but no real complaints.

I like it! Can't wait for next chapter.

Where's the rest? I love this, all those special people on the 'young' league, but I think Sean Connery or maybe Shane West should have been thier guide. The group you put together was very neat and all but a little confusing with the Jesse, Jake, and Jack thing. I love that you included Harry Potter and Buffy that rocks and Matilda is also cool. I can't wait until you update this. I have a feeling that the crew is more like the leader of the original League.
-Seraphyne

Totally cool! You have to update this!

Excellent! I've been waiting a long time for a type of story like this to come out!
Good job!

He can kinda speak when he's a animal. Its though speech. Kinda like psychic talk.

It's Ok, I guess.