continue

it's good, but u need more to it!Any way 10 out of 10

Pretty cool. Interesting story idea, but I take it you have abandoned it?

Just needs some grammar checking and it would be almost perfect, good job.

AWESOME! Update!

I just started reading this and... Holy SHIT! this rocks! kicksass! well read mine too! Although its a crossover, i explain the chara... doensnt it suck not to receive reviews?

Well, just take a look, wilya? ~Onikami

Interesting to add a little Mot/Keit in the next chapter.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

some typos some mismatched gender nouns, but for the most part I like this story very much please continue

Urashima Fighting Style eh? Isn't Kanako the succesor to the Urashima Fighting Style? I'd love to see her (and grandma) in this story.

Very update soon.

Its good and you need to continue.

it's good!

Three words- run-on sentences.

Your fic is great, probably one of the best in the LH section of , but you really need to work on diversifying the grammatical usage marks from all commas to involving some exclamations and periods.

Otherwise, great!

Only 3 words to say. I WANT MORE llol.. gjgjgj with chap 2.

chap 3 .. was ok.. but cant wait for chap 4.

keep it ccoming

keitaro's the best fighter in the story now i'm never goin to look at keitaro the same way ever again but in a good way this story is great i can't wait for the next chapter

Great Story. You need an update though. Don't rush it too much or it won't be as good. Take your time for the update.