Chapter 69 made me cry... Who does Harry end up dating? What about Severus?

I don't mean to not pick and maybe you wrote it this way to match the story but um muggles can't see dementors. But so far I am loving this story good work.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story so much I couldn't stand to take breaks. I apologize for the lack of reviews, but it couldn't be helped. :) Out of curiosity/hopefulness, did you ever actually write a sequel to this?

good story!

...this was such an awesome story. im glad they got time set write so that the war would not last for/four years...im sorry for aldren but so glad that it ended the way it did...

yeah i did cry happy now? *sniff*

love it so far.. but are the figures the muggles see dementors or DE cause muggles cant see dementors

hey there i know its been quite a while since u wrote this but i jsut started to get into hp fan fiction ive read all ur stories save 3 or 4 and i have to say this has got to be one of the best chpt 69 made me cry _ cant wait for more chapters from the other stories :D

Very nicely done. Congratulations on a job well done, and I'm looking forward to reading your other writings. Keep up the good work. Zafaran

zafaran at fastmail. fm

Thank you for writing this :) Sequel would be nice...

O.O I finally finished, though now I regret I started it! POOR LUCIUS! T.T You made me cry! (cries) Meanie! He's my favorite character ...Kinda. I love em, let's put it that way, my fav is Severus . I loved chapter 69, lot's of time frames there!

I can't believe how long this took me to read! (eyes widen, shakes head) Easily four months, probably longer! Lol. It WAS worth it though, the part where Voldemort died, reminded me of Carrie killing her mom in Carrie by Stephen King , I read that like a month ago. But OMG what a great fic! (grins like an idiot, a.k.a. Goku from DragonBall Z .)

Lol, I CAN NOT believe you only got 262 reviews for it. (growls...talk about mood swings...) If you re-posted it you'd prolly get much much more than that, I mean...Gosh! I've seen a 24 chapter have 500! This was much better too!

I love Fenix, and all the elves, and all of the Sylphs and Salamanders . I fell in love with your characters, you should write a sequel! I can't stand the thought of not reading anymore about everyone here! T.T I'll miss Fenix and well, EVERYBODY! But did you HAVE to kill Lucius? Oh well, what's done is done...

I LOVED the end/made up part . Lol, that was pretty funny! You have a crush on Snape too eh? (smirks evilly and regards computer wallpaper fondly)

Great job, just all around great! I really do hope you think about a sequel. *sigh* alas, I find myself with absolutely no more to say; therefore, I will not say anything else! I am a true genius!

Anywayz, Great job with the story!

Courtney (You know, I can almost hear your sigh of relif as my review comes to an end...I do ramble WAY too much...)

Hello wonderful author! :)

This is just to let you know that your story is listed in my website "Potions and Snitches", a fanfiction site dedicated to the mentor relationships between Harry Potter and Severus Snape. Please let me know if you want me to take it down, update your info, talk about chocolate frogs, or have any questions. A link to the website is in my profile.

Thank you for your story! :) It doesn't have a frog rating yet but it's on the list.

Jan

Harry looked around, ignoring Malfoy’s malignant stare and was a bit surprised when he realized that he was the first to finish. Don’t tell me that I’ve made a mistake somewhere… His thought evaporated when Snape returned, holding a jar with slimy, silver contents. He uncapped the bottle and placed a drop of the silver-like substance into Harry’s concoction. Snape instructed Harry to mix the contents and the boy did as instructed, mixing it three times clockwise, then three times anti-clockwise.
The word anti-clockwise' does NOT exist...
It's "Counter-clockwise"

Hi firesword! I have to tell you, this is the best story I've read in a long time. Please write more stories along these lines, I love what you've done with the characters. You've managed to make me laugh out loud and cry infront of the computer, much to the amusement of my friends and family :). You are absolutely amazing with your character developement and story line. I just love this story. The only thing i can ask to be improved on is to write more... i cant get enough!

Really Good Fanfic. I love the way you developed the characters and made Draco and Snape good and all. I really think that the boy could change! Anywho, good job. It kept me thinking for all 70 some chapters. And I love the fact that it is so long. I hate short stories that have good plotlines. Are you going to do another fic? Maybe about Harry's school? That would be awesome, even if it was just a short followup type of thing. Bout Fenix's baby and harry's school and all. Thanks for writing and leting me read it!