You have left so many great stories half finished. Hope you decide to continue this one some day. Maybe the two new RK movies coming out later this summer will inspire you. Thanks for another great, if incomplete read.
PS. By the way, Cape Cod is a sizable geographic feature projecting more than 40 miles into the Atlantic and containing 15 towns. (I 'm a native New Englander and have visited Cape Cod frequently)

Wow. That officer Taylor was a huge moping pain, wasn't he?

Please update again soon! This story's really interesting, and I really can't wait to see the next chapter. Will Yahiko explode from eating too many brownies? I hope Megumi's going to be okay!

Just came back to and reread your story. Still think it's awesome and deserves completion. I know I'm one to talk, but hey, if I can try to make a comeback, you can too, right?

Anyway, I still love what you've done with the setting to make it work and how you've tied the characters (or Kenshin at least) to the series as descendants. I would love to see how this thing ends-hopefully with some more discussion of the two pairings involved.

~Chunks

I like this story_

This? Is made of awesome.

I just love the whole 20's setting and how you've changed the characters to fit in. The idea of Sano as a big Italian gangster who gets beat up by his tiny mother is hilarious and Kenshin is just great. I never would have thought of Tsubame as his sister, but it really works and their relationship is so sweet. I also love the way the cold Kenshin always feels goes away when Kaoru touches him - it's just romantic.

I have to say I'm a little more into the romance than the adventure portion of the story, but that's more of a personal preference and it doesn't reflect on your writing, which is great btw.

I know it's been forever, but abandoning this story would really do it a disservice, so please update soon! :)

Hello? I know it's been a long time since you last updated, but please do so again. This is a very interesting and very well-written story. I'm intrigued so please continue. I want to know what happens when Kenshin's employers find out he doesn't want to work for them anymore.

Wasn't sure I'd like a story set in the American '20's, however your tale has me interested. I'm not sure were you are going with this but that makes it better.(Knowing what is going to happen before it does takes some of the fun out of it.) Keep writing, I'll be reading!

Very nice presentation of 20th century America. I hope you'll update eventually; I want to see how this ends.

What a creative story idea. You did an excellent job transporting the RK cast into 1920s San Francisco. The addition of Sano's Italian mother was priceless, and making Megumi a Carnegie heir to further the story was a great plot twist. However, you've gone and left the deaththreat unresolved. Not only that, the question of 'will Yahiko explode from eating too many brownies?' has yet to be answered.

I really love mysteries, and yours has such promise! Please do end it. I'm putting it on my alert list just in case you ever decide to finish.

It's interesting, the characters are compelling, and it's lots of fun to see the familiar RK characters in a different universe without losing their personalities.

hey, i really liked this story its so funny, whats funnier is my grandmother is Italian and acts just like Sano's mom. only she's more obsesive with feeding people. hey shes italian and food is love. anyway, could you update please? I loved the mental image of sano as italian. terrific mi of him duking it out with his mom... and losing! _ anyway so update please!

goombye

Wow I am just loving this so wonderful I could just kiss you!

Please write soon.

wowowowowowowow!i absolutely love it, i mean, so cool! and i love sanosuke as genius! points all around. please write more, and only advice is start putting in some serious romance.

I do hope you update this one. You can't leave us hanging with Saitou's just making his appearance!

I love what you've done with the characters and the story is quite entertaining. I'd really like to see the fanart for this fic, but the links don't seem to be working for the Hot and Cold pics.

Anyway, I love your fic. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! 8D

I love RK, detective stories and noir settings so this story is a treat for me. It looks like you have been busy writing other stories but I hope you'll continue with this. Great so far. Looking forward to more!

You have a very unique writing style. I find it both intriguing and amusing at the same time. However, your story, after eight chapters, doesn't seem to have reached a climax as of yet and it leaves me wondering if your story is intended to have a pure straightforward plot or indeed has no plot at all (This isn't meant to be an insult. Some stories really don't have a plot.). Don't forget to edit and keep writing.