very nice

Wow. This is uncanily similar to a story which I just published the first chapter of only a moment ago. Wonderfully done, beautiful, well-written, well-concieved...I have nothing negative to say. This is going on my favorites list!

wow,
that was extreamly well writen
but what realy is behind that locked door? ;)

GO GALADRIEL!

There is not enough fanfiction on the temptation of Galadriel, really there isn't. This is really good. I loved the description and the emotions in the vision that Sauron sends Galadriel; that was really powerful stuff.

I think my favorite bit was, "madness conceived by desire." That is so great. I can't even properly describe it, but it totally embodies everything about Sauron, and the seductive powers of both him and his ring. Coolness!

Very good! I can't believe you wrote this in an hour! It would take me forever.

Great job, keep writing.

I hope you write more. I really like it

Whoot! It rocked!

Deepy...

That was *amazing*. Beautiful. *REALLY* well-written. You took that quote and created a piece of writing equally as hard-hitting, if not more so. Excellent job.

~Thalia *so it's incoherent, but it's 5am...I liked it. ;)*

Very nice!

I liked the bit where you allowed Galadriel to see what Sauron could offer her...its something many authors dont touch on. Nice thougts, and unlike many, very in character.

Good job!