Speaking as a horror writer's standpoint, I have to say you did a good job writing this one. It was very suspenseful in the way it is done, and where you used your major to write this - that makes what you did here even more impressive.

very entertaining

I like these new stories...I knew you'd grow out that charmed stuff. Well, I'll try to get to a computer more often ,and review more. Keep updating the story so I can keep reading more and reviewing.

Thank you! I loved this chapter! Please write more soon! This is an SJR right? I would love to see more Sam and John moments!

This is very good! It is too bad that Coop isn't in this story because then you could have killed him off! I like George! Whatever happens though please let Sam and John get together in the end! Update soon!

Please, please, please update this story soon! I have always wondered why more SJR writers didn't write more AU stories with them in high school and college. I have always thought that someone should write an AU story involving Sam and John being married from the start before the VCTF with no Tom, and John being Chloe's father with Jack being after Sam and John, but with John still being alive.

Anyway just an idea I had, I won't write it because I am not a writer. I just like the read. Please, please update this story soon!