You are the most amazing author. A true poet! Beautiful.

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Aw... I like it!

well why does she hate him then? oh well. at least it comes true...

brillant

Bloody hell, Issy. If you don't get published one day ... hell, I'll start my own publishing company for you. You are a very talented writer and although I try, I only dream that one day I'll be able to write like you. I know this looks like it's just rambling, but I mean it. You will get there. Of that, I'm sure.

*Is listening to R Kelly 'I Believe I Can Fly'*

After reading 'Fragile',it's hard for me to NOT see this as a companion piece,so forgive me if it isn't but that's the impression and interpretation that I have.

And WHAT an impresion you have given me.

I think I explained in my 'Fragile' review how much I like your writing and how it made me feel,so take that as you will.

I will say again that your character insight is brilliant and you really do get into the character.I felt I was Lily,believe it or not.

I also think that 'her' view on love was very reminiscent to mine,so I liked that.

I think both 'Fragile' and this,have a "Soul Beauty".That's how I put my impression into words and I stand by it.

Well done luv,

Lady F

...Wow. This piece is absolutely beautiful! And short and sweet and elegant and honest etcetcetc. I can't think of anything that hasn't already been said! And I *love* your characterization of Lily :) Good to see something that's not so cliche.

*sniff* That was a beautiful metaphor, the one comparing writing to the sea.

another winner! I absolutely adored the James fic and this is right up there. I love how they both love eachother but don't know how the other one feels. I also like your unique perspective on love. over all quite excelant.

Interesting...

great! i love the way you capture emotion in your fics, your a great writer. keep writing!

wow

I have never been a fan of romance but this is really good and definately a favorite

Hey there! I've been meaning to review you for a while now. Sorry it took so long.

This is lovely, dear. ~_~ I can relate...ahh, thinking about it makes me feel so sage. I love the imagery you've used here; it's great for this kind of short one-shot. It kinda comes to life right here on this computer screen of mine...gorgeous. Definitely a nice change from the dark and sinister piece I'm currently slaving on for English. O' course, this means that I'm going to be up even later getting it done, but it was so nicely written that I'll just have to thank you instead of bitch at you about stupid things. :P

What I like about this is the fact that it's self-contained and not overly complicated...it's just one simple idea, conditioned and shaped into something short, sweet, and elegant. You didn't beat around the bush, which is much appreciated. Seems like you wrote this with honesty and feeling, too. Very nice job. I like it muchly. :)

So on that note, I'm off to go and drive myself stark raving mad over my English project. I'll probably be totally neurotic next time you hear from me. Ahem. Okay, I'm done.

Ta!

ZM

A really nice reflective piece, nice to see the flipside of 'fragile in a way.' I also love how youve translated this into the wizarding world, e.g. your 'invisibility cloak' simile. Nice job!

Wow! That can really touch someone's heart! It touched mine! Great poem!