Yo dude,

Took your time, but it was worth it. Very good chappie.

Con-ti-nue,

Cinn.

Cool fic! T/N fluff's great. Do continue, and don't keep me waiting long!

Hey,

I like your style of writing generally, you know where to detail and where to be quick.

However, after ten chapters, Trinity still hasn't found Dez, and all she and Neo have done is argue. I assume it's going to be a long story? Nothing wrong with that, just asking.

Update soon, if you can. Sorry if this was a pointless review.

~Solia

OMG, i am so glad to see youve updated again! i've really liked this story, and then it seemed to go away, but i'm so relieved to see more chapters!

please continue soon, youve got me hooked again, cant wait to find out more about Dez and Saturn. plus of course, jelious neo- isnt that cute?

update soon, cant wait to read more!

hiya. i absolutely LUVE all of your fics you are my fave author. i fink you got the characters personalits really well. if you don't write more i'll hunt you down and kill you.
No, only jokin. PLEASE finish dis story or i'll never forgive you.
p.s watch your spellings

I really like this story.
Can't wait until the next chapter is posted

I actually think that, if she told Neo, he would understand now. He said he was sorry, so he would atleast TRY to understand. Can't help having emotions, however... :)
Keep posting girl! :)

Yo dude,
You FINNALLY update! God how long have you kept us waiting!
Anyways, DEFINATELY worth the wait though. I'd have prefered it to have been a little longer.
You are updating soon, right?
Con-ti-nue!
Cinn.

heheh. that was funny. jeeze...Neo's busted, hahehahehaha. AH! i g2g, my mommer just made lunch!

please continue!

icing :P

my god, your chapters are way too short.

Keep writing! This is seriously gd stuff. But u might want to spell check before you post stuff...

Please write more soon, this is such a great story. There are a couple of spelling mistakes, but all are readable.

You must write more! I love it! Please update soon and i would suggest you check it through since there are a few typos

Your story is cool. Can you update soon please? The way you have described the characters is really good.

Hehe... Trinity overheard him. :) Sweet... I'm in love with this story. Keep up the good work, you're still on my fav's! :D