Not to nitpick or anything but 300 nautical miles are just 555.7km or 345 miles. They are no where near india

Dang I've only read 5 or so fanfics regarding evangelion but this takes the cake!
I love reading this story so much I might read it another 3-4 more times it was that good!
I would tip my at to you but I don't have one at the moment!
I will for sure give your other stories a read through but this is probably my Favorite eva fanfic, well done!

Dude that's serious dedication to your work coming back 10 years later! Nice

This may be the 6th or 7th time I've read this story, and something just occurred to me. You have them staying somewhere that has a nuclear power plant 20 miles away. Eventually it's going to go critical and into meltdown. The cooling systems will eventually fail. 20 miles is inside the exclusion zone for a nuclear meltdown. I think the exclusion zone for Fukushima and Chernobyl was at least 75 miles.

why would you tell her about the fapping boi

Thank you I apologize I should have left a review for every chapterI found myself so deeply enraptured I hope you will settle for genuine glowing praise

Thank you again while songs things I couldn't get behind and at times the writing was choppy . I enjoyed this tremendously
Ciao

I'm on about my third or fourth time reading the story, and something struck me. There's no way they should have had such an easy time getting through the Suez Canal unless it was the middle of the night there when the 3I happened. And you already stated it was the middle of the night in west to central Europe when it happened, so it would have been morning in the canal. The Suez is ridiculously busy. So busy in fact that there's ALWAYS a line to make it through the canal. At least one of the locks would have had a ship in it when the 3I happened if it was daylight when it happened.

And if they were so concerned about Asuka getting pregnant, why not just use condoms if they didn't want to use birth control pills? It's like they never heard of condoms in this story. They last for years and are still good.

I have to congratulate you on constructing the post-apocalyptic story I have been looking for. I'm really looking forward to your own story though, but on a side note you might want to mark the story as complete to get more people to read it, and they should. Keep up the good work! :)

Believe this is one of the best story I've read so far dealing with Evangelion and the aftermath. I was very impressed with the entire journey and character development of both the characters and the difficulties they went thru. I like the fact you ended up as a glance into the future of his life rather than continuation through everything. I felt it sum'd up the chapters very well. I'm not sure what it look like before you edited it but it turned out very well congratulations.

*slow clap*

Good and realistic journey given the circumstances. Still would have wanted a few more survive.
Love the highs and lows and even with the abrupt ending this was a great saga!

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It's an okay story. And the fact that you got back your interest in writing and completing this shows your dedication to your readers, admirers, reviewers, etc. Good work.

I love your intro here, that's easily the best way I've ever seen the disclaimer handled. Also the rest of the story is quite good, but that's implied by the fact that I made it to the third chapter and still don't have anything to complain about.

If the story is indeed complete, you should mark it as such so it shows up when people search for stories that are complete.

I can't honestly believe it's that simple to manipulate the power grid like that in a city. I know people have to be present for load balancing now. If you're producing more power than people use, some power generating has to be shut down to prevent from overloading the system. Though I suppose in the future it could be done automatically. Honestly, before messing with a city-wide power grid to get power, I would have gotten some consumer home wind-turbines and a mess of solar power cells with battery storage. While a power grid can be mostly automated, it still needs to be maintained and it would be a lot less problematic maintaining a home system than a city-wide system.

And why aren't Shinji and Asuka carrying firearms? If I were them, the first thing I would have done was procure a handgun or rifle for personal protection. Especially seeing that they knew that wildlife survived.