This made me smile...

haha! i think i caught on before you announced that abby was actually carter's wife because you never once mentioned who his wife was for about half the story. but very smart idea! i love how you described how she used to be and what she is now and that carter is still in love with her.

great job!

Great

this is one of the greatest storys I've ever read, love it, love how you spunn that whole Abby lockhart - Abby Carter thing.. lovet it lovet it lovet it

Wow. That was weird. I thought that Carter didn't really miss Abby. But then Abby was his wife. That was confusing. But so cute. Great Job!

~Chela~

Ive red this many times before...and it was a long time ago I red it the last time, so when i got over it again now. It was like...i dont knwow what to say...its amazing...I love it

That was great!I was a little confused at the beginning but other that that, it was great!

so cute !

it was pretty good...alittle confusing at first tho lol...and why did u put 'Fin' at the end? i mean i know it means 'end' in French but a lot of ppl dont know that lol

I think I had read this one before too, it's great, I was so sonfused when I first read it!

Camila

aw.. i love it! so.. perfect..

Aww! Auntie!Susan. And total Carby. And... and... e. I think I loved that too much. Melly's the one who told me to read this. Go Melly! And Carby too.

Beautifully written story. I enjoyed your writing style and the simple but touching plot of your story. Not to mention that the Susan-Abby-Carter friendship was a great addition, having Susan narrate the story was brilliant. Of course, Lucy Carter is just ADORABLE! Keep up the great work and looking forward to more of your stories (and I'm not even a Carby :P)

This was very cute. I like it alot.

Thanks for writing it.

~E~

That was really good!