I love thsi one-shot! very Good! Very Good! Poor Gohan got all ebtter!

wow, nice, poor gohan, good job

Did I read this before? Maybe? I dunno. All I know is that I liked it very much. Very much indeed, de gozaru yo. Liz wuvs your writing, that she does.

Gir: GIR DOES TOO!

Gohan: help?

Goten: *singing and staring off into space* My shiny teeth and me...

Um... bais?

Some grammar problems, but it's still a good fic, though I don't like this show/don't want to watch it/do not know who anyone is. But I liked the last sentence.

hm...what can i say? this is very well written...and um...it was...sad...yet...sweet...in a way...if that makes any sense to you...o_O oh well...hope you keep on writing! _ This was great!

that was um very original you certainly have a mind of your somthing new or out of the ordinary,like i'v never seen a piccolo/bulma, picolo/bra,piccolo/pan (I'm obssessed with piccolo-chan buy it's true!) or you could try crossovers I perfer DBZ/X-Men:Evolution crossovers my self.I personally write/like Mary Sues I've got adout 16 start but i'm too shy too post them I think everyone won't like them and/or not review why I'm starting too rambleso. Ja n'e

Really good... The ending seemed a bit rushed, but very very good.