thanks for the chapter its so much interesting...

thanks for the chapter broo

Zubat and Paras just feel like unnecessary catches
Ash has Butterfree and Pidgey for Flying and Nidoran for Poison
Alice has Beedril for Bug and will likely catch Oddish for Grass if do the Bulbasaur episode

so does this mean Ash will catch Mew in this?, she's my favorite Pokemon besides Pikachu after all, i hope there will be a lot of cute moments with her and Ash if you know what i mean, good luck.

Not a very original OC
You just took Leaf and gave her white hair then renamed her Alice
Even kept the clothes the same as Leaf
It's not a bad story though

Ash should get a Clefairy to mirror Alice's Jigglypuff
I can see the two having a rivalry
If Ash still gets Bulbasaur and Squirtale then Alice should get Oddish and Krabby
Maybe even there own Eevees
Ash gets Espeon and Alice an Umbreon

I suppose it's ok even though I'm more amourshipping then oc shipping but do your very best on this one hope you will also include the galar region