I gave you input on this story too. Where's my credit? Just Kidding.

In all seriousness, it was nice to see this story return. Can't wait to see where you take this story.

P.S. You cut out the part about Graceland? Why exactly? Having that once in a lifetime opportunity taken away was a serious contributing factor to Luna's anger. Just saying.

I see the additional little tweaks and improvements you've made to this prologue. It's still a really solid build-up to what will serve as the main story that follows afterward - we get a clear message that Luna isn't too awfully concerned about her grades as she should be, and I can imagine just how bummed she'll be when she ends up facing the consequences that she could have easily avoided if she only applied herself more diligently to her academic studies as she does her musical studies.

in this story i think you should Lincoln try to stay with her so she doesn't feel left out