You won’t believe how ecstatic I am to hear that Adam and the Faunus discrimination are going to be handled appropriately. I got so mad at the show they way they totally ruined Adam’s character to become “stalker ex-boyfriend” who was basically used as a platform to get Bumblebee to happen, as well as discrimination being forgotten (we haven’t heard Blake even mention anything to Weiss about Adam having a SDC mark, that would’ve been great confrontation and characterization, as well as great excuse for Blake and Weiss to *actually* talk to each other in the show). Another tip of mine during the Faunus rewrite: remember the Faunus have nightvision. Please. Or cut it out completely. The show forgets it then remembers so many times as the creators see fit to advance the plot that it wouldn’t matter if you cut it out or keep it.
Sorry, I’m just rambling at this point. Great rewrite once again. I loved it

Pretty good changes you hopefully got there. And please, for the love of god, I hope you drop the "crazy stalker ex-boyfriend" part of Adams character and keep him how he was originally supposed to be represented: as a mentor to Blake who slowly went down a dark path while still having good intentions, a Well-intentioned extremist, if you will. With good handling, he could be RWBYs version of Darth Maul.